| "Ryuusei no Solitude" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!update soon!
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This still doesn't explain why it's called a 'Tribunal', but I'm willing to wait. It was nice to read about an OC (especially a female OC) that didn't dominate the story. Gives me some hope for a future story of mine. But, I did notice a big mistake. You called an evergreen 'deciduous', but that only refers to trees that lose their leaves with the seasons, not evergreens.
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, please update again as soon as possible! I absolutly love this story! You are so favourited! I like how you play Hiei as a hermaphrodite ( as weird as that may sound) as that's how things end up coming out as in my head. kinda freaky cool, you know? PLEASE update quickly! I'll love you forever and review every chapter after this?
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Reviewed By: golden_fire_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I hope you update it soon. I have a question though, I really don't understand what the 'tribunal' thing is. What is it and what does having no contact with past relations do with it? Did I miss it in one of the other chapters? As for the fact that you are taking your time in getting Hiei and Kurama together... I thinks that's a brilliant idea! Ja!
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've moved to MMO. I've also been hoping that I was not one of the ones you were saying were too dumb to figure out why Hiei and Kurama aren't together yet, eh heh heh. Gee, you sure get Hiei enslaved a lot, don't you? Well, I guess I can't complain; the slavers do this for a living, so they should know what they're doing well enough to capture even smart and strong youkai, 'specially when said youkai is depressed. As for Kurama, what the heck is the 'Tribunal' about? I thought a tribunal was a panel of three judges who made decisions about stuff, so what does that have to do with a thief?
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: tetsumi(not logged in) On: September 14, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones ~ not signed in On: September 14, 2004 00:15 CDT
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This is Great, We loved the fight!!! write more soon please!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Hieis shadow (too lazy to sing in) On: September 13, 2004 22:19 CDT
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GAH! so much sexual tension! *dies* LOL Awesome! I love it!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones ~ not signed in On: August 23, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more soon, please, this is realy good and we liked it a LOT!!! We Love this fic and hope you will write more soon as you possibly can please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Julitica...not signed in On: August 21, 2004 22:46 CDT
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I want moreeeeeeeee! I musssssssst have MORE! LOVE LOVE LOVE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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Title: IT DESREVES A HIGHER NUMBER THEN 10
Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: August 10, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how sad. That part of Kuronue dying like that always gets to me. *sobs* UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 14:31 CDT
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Great plz update soon
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones, not sighned in On: August 10, 2004 10:06 CDT
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This is a realy great chapter, and I like you putting kourone in it that way. More soon please.
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Title: Me love!
Reviewed By: Cece WIlliams (Not logged in... library comp) On: August 03, 2004 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really good. And the "Master Kurama" bit... hilarious! I would laugh out loud, but I'm in the library. Keep this up! ^_^ Kurama: This is a library, remember? Oops. *whispers* Keep it up.
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