| "Sins of Her Future" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 12:30 CDT
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"Inu yasha's eyes widened, the bold jester from the shivering girl catching him slightly off guard" I think you want gesture not a midevil clown. ;) i don't know if you care but i thought i'd let you know.
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Title: Its been a while..
Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been on mediaminer in a LONG time but after getting an email update and reading the whole thing again.. I can't believe i forgot about it! Amazing story! Keep writing please :)
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 23:40 CDT
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ok...just did a marathon read of your fic. The story is dark and divinely riviting!! I look forward to the next update! I can't help feeling that this aku-asshole is somehow a reincarnation of Naraku...hmmmmm.... anywho, one tiny piece of advise that I've learned the hard way, always check your chapters a gajillion times before posting...spellcheck, edit, re-edit...some of your phrasing is a bit off due to mispells and at times it is obvious that you were caught in the moment while typing this due to awkward word usage. Just a bit of constructive criticism....like I said, my beta pounded these into my head for months till it finally became second nature. And even still, I slip into old habits and he teases me about it!! Good luck pounding out another wonderful chapter! can't wait!
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Reviewed By: LordTakeoRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. Its a great change from the usual 'Naraku dies and Inu Yasha and Kagome live happily ever after' type of fanfiction. I can't wait to read more of it
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 20:39 CDT
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LOVE this story. You've done one of the best jobs I've seen of keeping everyone in character! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: March 26, 2007 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! I love your fic. I wanna know what happens next
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Title: Sins of the future
Reviewed By: Aquiria On: August 30, 2006 23:31 CDT
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Hi! Love your fic! Can't wait to see what happens! Thought I would let you that your last chapter (chapter 10) isn't loaded all the way. Huggles Aquiria
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Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did such a great job at witing these stories that I hope one day you will become another J.K Rowling. She's the writer of the Harry Potter books. Like her stories yours are just as good. You make me so into the story that I just do not want to stop. Well keep up the wonderful work. From A nice fan Beccie
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Reviewed By: Terra34 On: July 05, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Please Update soon
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: April 27, 2005 19:30 CDT
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this is very touchy please update
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Title: Keep going :)
Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, alot :D *waiting patiently for next update*
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: August 18, 2004 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still great as ever. I can't wait till the next chapter. Will Inu kick that guy's ass? I would so love to watch that or, uh, read that. LOL. I would seriously get a bowl of popcorn ready for that!!! =D
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 21:11 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: July 27, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only 13 reviews? Come on ths story deserves more then that. I have been following all of your stories from the beginning. Your user name, luna_sea, is under my favourite authors list and so I get notified with every updated chapter for every story you have written so far. I look forward to new chapters in any story possible because I love all of them! Update sometime soon! PLEASE! -inuyasha_obsession (inu.ob)
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 13:12 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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