| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: rinjii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love the ending! it was so so so funny! and i'm so happy that you finally put in the lemon! it was awsome! please update soon! love ya!
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Title: It's about time
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took him long enough to finally make a decision about her.
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Reviewed By: Ashley C. On: January 20, 2005 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this story thru a link on the ICAF home page. i love reading fanfics and this one did not dissapoint. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: This chapter was long awaited and I thank you
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: January 20, 2005 13:42 EST
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Numisma, Oh God I thought I wouldn't be able to review your new chapter! I loved it by the way! A lemon. I loved it and I could have waited. It was what I expected and a little more. So what's the next part and turmoil that they have to go through. I know things aren't going to go smoothly from now on. Come on tell me what's popping! This chapter was 44 pages and I printed every last page. I sat down and I read every last page and I squealed for the good parts and laughed for the funny and panted for the hot parts. I expected more pain. I see InuYasha as Masochistic. I'm not sure how I see Kagome, she's shy one moment and outgoing the next. I guess I see her as a little sadistic and masochistic. She's kinda like me. Although I like to give it a little more then recieve it and Kagome seems like she likes to recieve a little more then she likes to give. That's alright with me I'll never sleep with her. I love the way InuYasha came to terms with his situation. Talking about wet dreams! I like the way a cranky Miroku answers the phone and I think I would like to give him a test drive too. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for that next update. It took me forever to find your user name bacause I refused to log into my eamil and I can't search for your story because these computers at work are strick about what they consider inapporiate. And honey your story falls into that "NO-NO" bracket. So I have my friends open, cut, copy, and paste and email it to me. Love MN
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 12:20 EST
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Holy cow that was a HUGE chapter! I have one question - Inuyasha's inner diagalog: "Hate these things, but whatcha gonna do, right?" he drawled as he tossed it lightly to the side. And as long as he used them religiously, she'd never find out. There were some things other people were not meant to know. When are you going to explain this hum?
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Title: dragoninu2
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:21 EST
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Just one word will sum up what I have just enjoyed. . . DAMN
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Reviewed By: The Random Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 06:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic (just found it ^_^) and I really liked the way you make Kagome all bitchy about not being able to read Kanji (I can't do it either) but I just wanted to ask why her clock was singing out "Itadekimasu" when that means "what a wonderful feast" so...is that just like...what clocks sing over there or what? anyways, good chapter. On to read some more...
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Reviewed By: lammora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 02:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Its about time Inuyasha got to it. I was wondering how long he would make the poor girl wait. And the rest of us as well. It really makes me wonder what he is going to do to her now. I really do hope that this isn't the last chapter. But something tells me with the whole Naraku thing still up in the air, i dont' think it is. I can't wait for your next chapter. i already know you wil make it just as good as the rest. keep it coming PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa (Damn thing wont let me stay Logged In) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the wait is always worth it when it comes to this story, and I have one thing to say. ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME! I've been waiting for this moment since I began reading this. My friend got me hooked, but I found it through Kris. So yeah.Can't wait for the next chapter to come out, and I know the wait for that will be well worth it. Your style of writing always has me feeling like I'm right there with the characters, witnessing it like a third person viewer. But then that just makes me seem like a voyeur, when I'm not. Hopefully the next chapter will be just as good as this one, so don't keep your readers waiting for too long. I'll be checking in on you frequently to see what's up, and maybe even to re read some stuff because its that enjoyable for me, I especially love how you described the piercings in the beginning to the story, I hate to sound like a rabid fangirl, but I had shivers running up my spine every time you mentioned one. I'm getting shivers right now. I dunno, maybe I have a piercing fetish, but now I'm getting off topic. Speaking of fetishes.... I like how you incorporated the school uniform into the story, I wasn't expecting it. So to make a long review short, I love your story. And now I must be getting to bed because it is 10:50 P.M. and I have school in the morning.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew. That was just about the hottest and most satisfying lemon ever! *sigh* I wish my boyfriend and I still had that kinda passion. Absolutely loved this chapter and you just reinforced the fact that this is my most favorite story.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah *puff of smoke wafts over the computer screan* Now that was one fucking lemon for the ages. I need to hurry up and fide my freaky soul mate and inact some of that. ja
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:35 EST
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i liked this chapter a lot. i liked how even though miroku didn't mean to be abrupt like that, his advice still worked. i loved when he told her and the day of. very nice chapter and i can't wait for more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this latest chapter, Numisma! You managed to keep the consummation of the relationship in the same tone as the rest of Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, and keep both of them perfectly in character throughout the scene. Brava! Also, I liked Inuyasha's realization, earlier, that he was only able to sleep well when Kagome shared his bed--that was a very tender and necessary emotional beat.
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Reviewed By: firebird5 On: January 18, 2005 11:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I totally love this story. It's not over yet, is it? You are an excellent writer. I love writing, but always have trouble writing anything as long as what you have. Not only is it quantity, but it's quality too. And originality. You so rock my world. Can't wait to see what you have up next. :)
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Title: *fan fanning herself silly*
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 07:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot Damn! Woooo! Man...That was a lemon to wait for! Wow! And how romantic...mmmmhmmm...*licks lips and faints from the heat*
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