| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew. That was just about the hottest and most satisfying lemon ever! *sigh* I wish my boyfriend and I still had that kinda passion. Absolutely loved this chapter and you just reinforced the fact that this is my most favorite story.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah *puff of smoke wafts over the computer screan* Now that was one fucking lemon for the ages. I need to hurry up and fide my freaky soul mate and inact some of that. ja
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:35 EST
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i liked this chapter a lot. i liked how even though miroku didn't mean to be abrupt like that, his advice still worked. i loved when he told her and the day of. very nice chapter and i can't wait for more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this latest chapter, Numisma! You managed to keep the consummation of the relationship in the same tone as the rest of Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, and keep both of them perfectly in character throughout the scene. Brava! Also, I liked Inuyasha's realization, earlier, that he was only able to sleep well when Kagome shared his bed--that was a very tender and necessary emotional beat.
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Reviewed By: firebird5 On: January 18, 2005 11:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I totally love this story. It's not over yet, is it? You are an excellent writer. I love writing, but always have trouble writing anything as long as what you have. Not only is it quantity, but it's quality too. And originality. You so rock my world. Can't wait to see what you have up next. :)
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Title: *fan fanning herself silly*
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 07:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot Damn! Woooo! Man...That was a lemon to wait for! Wow! And how romantic...mmmmhmmm...*licks lips and faints from the heat*
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: January 18, 2005 03:43 EST
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Hahaha! That was great! I especially loved the part when InuYasha brought her into the break room and hugged her. I had tears in my eyes! And I screamed "YES!" Oh man, I'm so happy now that they FINALLY got back together. Wow, it was worth waiting for. I can not wait to see what happens in their relationship after this! LOL
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Title: arcticslap@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: ArcticKitsune On: January 18, 2005 01:25 EST
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You know there are so very many things that I could say about this story and your writing. But I have neither the time nor the inclination to expend that much of my energy. So I'll make this succinct ("short and sweet" for those lacking a proper dictionary). I could talk about everything from your butchery of English grammar to your repetitive habit of creating new words that make no sense whatsoever. Your habit of shortening words to slang at inappropriate times is particularly juvenile. On the other side of that, there is no reason to use thirteen words when one will do and make a greater impact. You also don't appear to be aware that you can't slap a random suffix on a noun and make it a verb. It's perfectly apparent that the finer aspects of creativity completely escape you. As for your attempt at writing a lemon scene, I believe I can sum up my feelings in one sentence. "Chi no namida ga dete dete tomaranai yo."
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok, right now I'm totally giddy with just how fucking GOOD that was! wow... I love this story, have I said that before? Your writing is juat great and I love your perspective through this whole thing. It's totally amazing... and what an awesome lemon! ::fans self:: wow. WOW.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 01:12 EST
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That was well worth waiting for. Great work, as always. There's not much for me to say, really, but there never really is. Best of luck on the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 00:30 EST
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w00t! *does a happy dance* that last part was hilarious. Please keep up the great work and update asap. XD Krystal.
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Title: Wow!!!!!
Reviewed By: Cindygirl (NSI) On: January 18, 2005 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! That chapter was well worth the wait. Great JOB!!!! You out did yourself. That was one of the best lemons I have ever read. Keep up the good work and I'm glad he got over his problem. Can't wait for the next chapter. THAT WAS JUST TOO HOT!!!!! ^o^ :)
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Title: Amagad...
Reviewed By: Ary-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET JESUS, what an update! Excellent character interaction (especially Inuyasha and Miroku...LOOOOOVED it!), excellent lemon, excellent CHAPTER! Action-packed. *giggles* You are my favorite! ^()^
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Title: Taku mo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn impatiant hentai people pissing of the author. It worries me, there's a complete after the status of the fic. Its not over is it...I hope not. Well anyway I've been spending the last week reading this fic when ever I could, and I have to say I'm a real baka for not reading it when I first saw the title. I hope you find the time to update soon, and I'm more then happy to be teased until forever as long as the story is as good as this one is. The sex scene isn't everything people.
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Title: .......
Reviewed By: KikyoKiller (not signed in) On: January 10, 2005 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful!!! I really hope you update soon!! PLEASE!!! I can't wait to see...errr...read..what happens with Inuyasha Kagome next...Well...till then...ja ne!!!!!!!!
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