| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:49 EST
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I am so fucking happy with this story I can't even BEGIN to tell you! Yay! Yay! YAY!!!!! Great chapter! hope to read more soon!
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Title: Movie House Hanyou
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:12 EST
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Evil Author, EVIL Author, you made me snort diet pepsi through my nose when I read that age of consent statement. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. When I first started reading this story, it was on AFF, and I was a little leary. I have since come to love this story. Definately off the beaten path, but so goooooood. Yummy fun. The next couple of chapters ought to be EXTRA good. Just how many inturruptions can be presented, or will that be too evil for you? I can't wait. Just the kind of Cliffy I love.
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: November 24, 2004 21:00 EST
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HOLY SHIT! i never saw that coming! XD it was an absolutely WONDERFUL plot twist! ^^ i can sooooo~ picture Inu-Yasha's facial expression while reading that... XD ...anyway, update soon! ~*~Netiri~*~
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Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 20:56 EST
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wow great chapter and oh yeah 16 (go inu)um by the way do we get to see some bdsm on kaggie oh and a personal request i loved your miroku/inu bit on a past chapter, maybe you could do a three way or just a one shot for my own sick twisted little amusement plssssssssssssssssss? and thank you.
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Reviewed By: LorelaioftheSea On: November 24, 2004 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great chapter, but evil cliffy!!! ;_; I hope it doesn't take you too long to write the next chapter, because now I'm _dying_ to find out what happens!! XD
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Title: ch. 23
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:42 EST
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Perhaps I presume to think that ChibiS's comments had anything at all to do with this turn of events, but if they did, then having Jakotsu get fired at this point is a decent save. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This whole chapter was a decent save. Way to take a flaw and turn it into a plot twist.
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Title: Thank the Gods!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 15:54 EST
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Man... love the loophole! My God, I was wondering how in the world I could be patient for a year... I so love your story. I especially love InuYasha's explanation of pleasurable pain. So many misconceptions out there. I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter. Ja ne! :) Joy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 13:44 EST
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Well in Texas it is 17. Just in case the other person is a year or two older, you know high school romance. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, i can't wait for the next chap! :D
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Reviewed By: Ary On: November 22, 2004 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amagad! I love this fic so far. I heard of it through KrisCynical's fic illustration page and I was skeptical at first, but then I started reading and was totally enthralled! I'm way excited for the next chappy. Please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 11:03 EST
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i like this story and i can't wait for more. i love how inuyasha is in this one, it's great! this story had me from the first chapter and...and i'm sorry, i can't stop thinking about inuyasha...hehe...this story is awesome.
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Title: Freaky
Reviewed By: Rache On: November 08, 2004 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing isn't fantastic, but it's definately entertaining. I think what really gets me the most about this fic is the sheer number of similarities between this fic and my life, ranging from the Japanese (I'm not fluent, but I can get by) to working in a movie theater with shady managers. Can you see the twitch my eye has taken on because of this fic? The only thing that doesn't seem to connect me to the fic is that I don't smoke anything at all. I just wanted to share this massive, freakish coincidence. - Rache
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 03, 2004 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! another great update and a little bit of IY/Kag fluffy stuff... and of course the ever selfless kags thanks jak! lol and it seems she may be getting closer to naraku's secrets.... can't wait for the next update!!!!
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Title: Chapters 21 and 22
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 00:23 EST
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(petting a large fish) Sniff! I have a bass named Velvet too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The sweetness and intimacy between Inuyasha and Kagome is very ...sweet and intimate. Crud. I've been up to late watching election results... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The identity of the person with the thick accent is not at all clear. If it is supposed to be Cher, I have to wonder what it has to do with Clint pocketing money. The whole off-screen activity sounds like it's supposed to be one event, but it doesn't match up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's not clear why the paychecks are smaller than anticipated. I can't tell if it's silly teenage employees shocked to find the taxes taken out or if Naraku is embezzling.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: November 01, 2004 17:34 EST
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Great chapter, as always. That one shot was hilarious. Good luck with the next chapter!
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