| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite chapters b/c of the interplay and dialogue between Inuyasha and Kagome. I felt more attuned to their connection and feelings for one another. This chapter brought it more together for me. Poor Kagome has suffered injury after injury on this job. 2 questions: How does Naraku know there's something between Kagome and Inuyasha? And will Inuyasha be able to strickly kiss Kagome without losing self-control which is why he didn't want to kiss her-I know he's trying to treat her better by allowing this intimacy but will he be able to keep his control until April? Oh yeah, 3rd question how far away from April are we? thanks! it was worth the wait!
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Title: Brings back so many memories!
Reviewed By: MizuiroPanda On: October 25, 2004 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly adore this fanfiction. I also work at a movie theater (and have since a month before Kagome was hired in the story!) and this not only is enjoyable for me as an InuYasha fanfiction, but also as a story about a movie theater. I can relate to soooo many things. ^.^ Anyway, you're doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to read more! Thank you for sharing such a refreshing style and concept!
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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i just spent the last couple days reading your story...would of probly taken a day if i didnt work or go to the gym...ANYWAYS...i was kinda skeptical about reading your story cuz it's so different from what i normally see but im like what the hell i'll give it a shot and this is awesome. I think its cool that you have the whole story in Mineapolus(spelling?) cuz im all the way in canada and i've been there a couple times so its i think its cool i know what places your talking about like st.pauls and nicolett st. :o) so keep up the awesome work cuz im totally loving this story..cant wait to see the next chapter! :o)
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Reviewed By: pinkdancinghippo On: October 24, 2004 19:44 EDT
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Great story. Probably one of the most origninal AUs I've read yet. I just read the whole thing today and I have to say that after reading Inuyasha doing the hampster dance I think I've know read every possible thing us fans can do to poor Inuyasha. Love the story! Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: October 24, 2004 03:15 EDT
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HEY great chapter! Sorry to hear about the annoying dude..People can be such bastards at times.. I think this story should of placed first... Please keep up the great work and update asap. I'm looking forward to finding out just what happens next. -Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: October 24, 2004 01:14 EDT
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Awesome work, once again. It's great to be checking my email and seeing MHH updated, though it sometimes takes me a bit of a while to read it. Good luck on the next chapter, I'm sure it'll be more than great--as always.
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 23, 2004 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update!! i love this story to death!!! hope it doesn't take too long to update again, cuz i'm obsessed and addicted! i really like everything you've done with inu's character in this story, all his quirks, obsessions and addictions..... i think it's awesome
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: October 23, 2004 15:17 EDT
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wow...that sounds strangely like the little bit of insanity i call my life... ^^ people dancing and shouting and doing weird stuff the freaks others out! very,very nice work. update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 10:40 EDT
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You know, you can delete unsigned reviews on FFnet. Just go to 'Remove Reviews' on your options. It's three above C2, and right below stats. To remove an unsigned review -- signed ones can't be removed -- just click on the word 'Anonymous' where it says what type of a review it is. Then you'll get a popup saying what the review's ID is. Just paste that ID# into the text box and hit the "Remove Review" button./// If you already knew this, then... oh well. But if you didn't then... now you know. I only found out about this when someone I gave CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM to started to harass me. I was blunt in the review, but I was never mean. So I used that to remove the harrassment that they didn't have the courage to sign. I have rules for doing stuff like that. If it puts down my work, but says why and gives good reasons, then I keep it up. But if it's just a spiteful flame, I take it down. Also, if I am accused of Plagerism, I take it down. Nothing makes me more angry when someone accuses me of taking someone else's work. Especially when one of my stories was plagerized./// But, keep up the good work! I like they way you aren't going into all that cliche 'youkia mating mark.' And I absolutely love the name you give Inuyasha's contented growl. Brux. I love to say it! I might ask to borrow the word if I can't find one I like later on. You have so much talent in writing, and I hope you keep up all your good work. You deserve all those awards.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 06:07 EDT
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Great chapter. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 06:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say...this is the best chapter in this fic yet! I don't like that Inuyasha and Kagome are seperated, but I'm sure they'll pull through somehow. Wow, someone's trying to screw you over in reviews? Geeze...How cowardly and stupid...You are an awesome writer, and you deserve every award for this fic. I don't care who this person is. Ignoring that annonymous twit is the hardest, but the best thing for you to do. That's what they hate the most, when they see you don't care. Honestly, they are geting to you now, but don't let them get to you later. They got their beef, let them straddle it themselves! LOL!!!! I'm behind ya, and I support your work 100% garanteed! Love ya, and your work! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well regardless of stupid people, I like this fic. I wait for you to update alot. I may not review all the time, but it doesn't mean that I don't read it. I have been into this fic from the brginning and I don't see anything wrong with it. I just wish that you would update alot sooner, but that's about it.
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Reviewed By: Malice Elisa On: October 23, 2004 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story as always. you're the first person to actually mention bands I listen to in there story. Also close to my lifestyle. So your story is easier for me to understand then others.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 02:00 EDT
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As always, loved the chapter. I'm always really struck by the way you interrpret Inuyasha's personality and mannerismis and how Kagome reacts to him. It's unique and very interesting to read. I'm sorry if my spelling is off tonight, it's kinda late and I'm... off. Anyway, I'm really glad you updated and I'm looking forward to more as soon as you can write it! Oh, and I hope the prick who's insulting you chokes on his words. The story is great.
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Title: Tenshi no Hinote
Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't you just despise those people who bug the hell out of you? I know how you feel. Anywho, WONDERFUL chapter. But damn it! Just a touch of lime! Gah! Frustration! And poor Kagome. It was all put together well. You're one of my favorite authors here on MM.org. Great job! Keep up the fantastic work! I'm thinking of putting up my own AU fic...But school is a damn bitch and it's consuming all of my time! Gah! Anyway, I'll go now...Yeah, perfect work. Love it. Thanks for writing.
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