| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Title: Hot
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:08 EDT
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:43 EDT
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ooooh great chapter...please keep up the good work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love your story! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 20, 2004 19:49 EDT
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How did Naraku get away w/hitting people with a baseball bat?! Whoa! Isn't that illegal? Why didn't everyone in there jump his ass? This is scary! I know peeps who would have waited for him when he got off work, snuck up on him from behind and beat the crap out of him! He broke that kid's hip! And Kagome-damn! so close but not cigar! I know she wanted to punch his sorry scum licking ass in the face- and Inuyasha is barely in check at this point! I htouhgt he was going to jump her in the car- this is all getting sooo crazy- I can't believe Naraku is getting away with this! Grrr! Somebody beat his ass and Kagura's too! Please!
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 20:24 EDT
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Great chapter!Update soon.
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Title: shit i forgot to sign out
Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 11:51 EDT
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not a bad chapter. I liked it. I wish inuYasha would act on his instincts, all he has to do is not get caught. Simple,don;t fuck in movie house and aound mother. and if they report Naraku to the fucking cops he will go down. Or they can level the playing field. anonymous shit, get even without ever getting even. If InuYasha's the only demon in this fic then he could certainly do it without getting caught. come on people think. Naraku has all the power because no one's made him wary enough to watch his back. And Kagome started out bitchy then she when bithcy eek, what happened?? I mean she should speak her mind a little more. don't you think?
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: July 13, 2004 04:38 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Update soon, I hope.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 03:56 EDT
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hey keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I so love this story!! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: kagomehigurashifan001 On: July 13, 2004 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I think its the best one iv read so far, please hurry and update, i just want kagomes bday to come and all that other shit so her and inu get to gether, oh by the way does kagome do drugs too or is it just inu? OR will she start because of inu?
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:15 EDT
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It's relly good... please write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:15 EDT
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Damn. What a chapter. I never thought Naraku woud get that evil. A baseball bat? Damn. Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: zardoz582000 On: July 12, 2004 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done and entertaining to the max! Never would have thought IY would have been into the piercing scene (and wonder if he'd branded as well), but when you think about it, why not - it's such an animalistic/primal thing, it would be natural for him. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 08, 2004 18:48 EDT
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I really liked this chapter. It was very, very realistic. You address various issues, and I've met my share of Wiley-scum in the world-they come in different shades from all over-sad but truth-Good riddance! Poor Kagome! My close friend, adapted brother was stationed in Japan and he used to tell me about how ostracized peeps of mixed ancestry like Kagome were and her painful feelings about the matter are very real. Thankfully, everyone is not hateful, bigoted, racist and so very xenophobic (although the US does hold its share of hypocrisy in claiming to embrace its mult-diverse, multi-ethnic, multi-cultural denizens). I truly, honestly abhor ignorance-what makes me sad is that I just saw a headline today stating the stats for reading books in the US has plummeted-and there is an intolerance twds intellectuals also and no questions anything it seems- Enuff of my rant-Gomen! Please keep up the excellent work, seeing your update made my day! But why didn't Inuyasha catch up with Kagome so she would not have to walk home alone?? Bad puppy!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 01:10 EDT
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Wow. what a chapter. Poor Kag. I forget what happens past crewfew. I know you get a ticket right? But do you spend the night in jail too? Love the story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Reviewed By: The Impaler On: July 06, 2004 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be my all time favorite fan fiction. PLEASE UPDATE!! I usually don't go for fan fiction that actually has a plot, but this one is really intriguing, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 07:08 EDT
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lol well great chapter. Poor Kag, she doesn't get a break does she? Well Keep up the good work and update asap. I cannot wait to find out what happens next and I totaly love your story! It's spiffy! lol Krystal.
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