| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 17, 2004 19:04 EDT
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OMGoth!! This way the chapter that tickled me raw w/the scene with Inu having an argument w/his dick! I was too done! I loved it! It was great! I know some guys actually do this! That scene where he goes to be punished...I didn't need to be there to feel his agony- well done- Please keep writing-
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha. Sexual frustration....I would have just called Miorku...*grins evilly* I wouldn't mind spending one sleepless night w/ him.. te he. Well please keep up the great work an update asap. I love this story soo much and can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 02:31 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Don't have anything else to say... heh.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit! I love it pls writte more soon and thank you for making my dreams and nightmares one in the same.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:30 EDT
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I feel so bad for Inuyasha. Why does he think that he has to resort to that kind of self-mutilation? Maybe 500 years has warped his psyche alot. Was the Kikyo thing really that bad for him? ////////// Also, if Kagome and Inuyasha are going to stay together once they get together, will there be a way for Kagome to live as long as Inuyasha will? ////////// I hope you write a way for Kagome to help Inuyasha soon.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: June 14, 2004 13:50 EDT
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I love this story. It made me take up smoking...uhh..not really...I just had to try clove. Not bad. And I used to smoke grass so that was a plus. I never wanted fang piercings but reading this it made me want to get them. I already decide that because of anime I was going to get one fang done. I havent' changed my mind...but I love InuYasha in this story. He kicks so much ass. InuYasha sounds so cool and surpriseingly so does Kagome. I can't believe how incerditably cool he is...I would worship him like the Demon he is...ahh sooo cool...keep up the good work and please update soon...I need more to feast on!!!! Love MissNikki
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 10, 2004 16:07 EDT
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Another chapter to yank us in. You've teased us by revealing a bit more, I liked the torture! That Naraku is a slimey so-and-so! And I really like that you brought up the fetish about Kouga. I watched a whole segment on people who into that fetish where they dress up completely or partly as animals or stuffed toy animals. The situation w/Miroku and Sango reminds me of the flick "Chasing Amy". It works. And last (but best of all) the limey scene with Kag/Inu in the storage room. I liked it alot. The only probably is I wasn't clear that Kagome was into that spanking and that Inuyasha was aware of it until the end. Anyway, please, please update. It got harried in there and they almost got caught! But the tension and desire is there so strong. I can't wait to see how it flows hotter.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 03:52 EDT
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oh man that was hilarious. You must keep up the great work! i can't wait for the next chapter. I love your story so much. Please update asap. I'll be waiting. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: morly On: June 07, 2004 15:21 EDT
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wooo hooo a spanking from Inuyasha lucky girl! And what was up with those brownies? For some reason I thought they were laced with cannibus, but you didn't show what happened at the restaurant.
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Title: Yeowza!
Reviewed By: kagomesjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it's possible, I love this story even more that Caught in the wrongful hands of desire. ... Yep, definetely possible. This story is so awesome! I love your raw and powerful and just wonderful writting style. I just can't wait for your lemon pieces for this story. Hee hee...;) I hope you continue, cause this has GOT to be one of the best stories I've read so far. In fact, if you have the time, check out LadyDi's Fate and Destiny. It's awesome, wonderful, twist-filled, and the fact that LadyDi is my beat has nothing to do with this plug...Seriously though, this authoress is so awesome and wonderful and stupendous that you will feel very nice when you read this story. There are even lemons here and there in it. It's a reincarnation story and on ff.net. ^-^ Until next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:59 EDT
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Yay! They kissed! hehe so... How hard is it going to be for them to keep their hands off each other now, hmmm? ::chortles with glee:: ok, I'm being weird. Sorry. But the chapter was good. I've gotten really excited about reading this and it's probably because it's pretty different from most things I've encountered. I like your writing style. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: June 06, 2004 21:08 EDT
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Haha, awesome chapter. Thanks for updating ^^
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originally, I was kinda worried aobut reading this but you know what? I was being an idiot. This is damn good. And I can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 02, 2004 14:20 EDT
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Gomen, for not being clear. Hmm...I may have been talking about his personality since you illustrate how he his nice and quite nasty, which works b/c it stays with his personality in the manga, under all that bark and bite, he has a heart of gold. Yes, that must be it b/c you did explain that he was more into girls than boys, not "switching" back and forth unless it was a hot hottie guy that you couldn not blame anyone for not passing up! Agree Jonny Depp! Yes! This chapter was really good, but is it deliberate pacing thus far? Not a lot has happened jsut yet. You're keeping the cards close to your chest. We jsut get a glimpse of things. B/c the story is building brick by brick and not layer by layer. Is this torture deliberate? Cuz if it is...well you are doing a good job of it. Looking forward to the next chapter. I didn't know I was a masochist. Ha!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 02:16 EDT
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I'm glad you write what you know. It's better than writing nothing at all, because with your story, you wouldn't have much of anything if you didn't describe and elaborate on everything. I like it that way. Anyway, awesome chapter. I finally got around to reading it. Hope you update soon :)
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