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Reviewed By: AngelicDevilz On: June 11, 2004 13:17 CDT
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thats a good ?... hmmmmmmmm... i say not to fit, but they hook up neways!!! hahahahahahahaha
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Title: Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright!!!!!!!!!!!! It's about time Inuyasha+Kagome finally hooked up! Kikyo DOES NOT deserve Inuyasha's affections. Kagome is the better choice, by far. Great work, and I hope to see Ch. 8 up soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o) On: June 01, 2004 18:40 CDT
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ooooo im really happy everything worked out for Kagome with her family, it'd suck if it didnt. I cant wait to see what the next chapters like. WIll they or wont they?
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Reviewed By: inukenshin On: May 30, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really amazing fo ra first timer i must say
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Oh man! Poor Kag! The next chapter will either be really sad or really funny....or most likely really ackward, cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Orb (not nonline) On: May 18, 2004 16:17 CDT
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this was a good chapter. They're s cute. I hope can can update soon.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 02:21 CDT
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LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG LOL LOL
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Reviewed By: huh? On: May 15, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Why was Inuyasha all blushing and bashful and then all the sudden he turns into like this sex machine with all kinds on commanding knowledge of sex? Kind of a flip don't you think? It doesn't make any sense.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 19:08 CDT
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aww he marked her lol, thats so cute!! I like the open questions at the end and beginning of each chapter. It kinda gives it an oldie batman feel.
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:08 CDT
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cute, cant wait til next ch
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:59 CDT
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oooo I can see this being a really good story. With stupid whore Kikyo in the mix a whole truck-load of angst is sure to get dumped. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that's cute!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha so i gusse inu learned about the birds and the bees. Oh poor kagome she must have been so red that she look like a beet from that talk with her mom and inu in there with her.hahahah keep writen i like this story alot.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 02, 2004 16:41 CDT
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Well this is good. I am one for taking it slowly if this is based on the eppie you said then I don't believe Inuyasha & Kagome have really know each other that long. Plus Kagome is only like what 15 maybe 16 at this time so I think they should take it slowly. Maybe spend some time together that isn't hunting shards. Without the others peeping at them and being nosy. I would prefer they don't spend a bunch of time in the future or if they do it is not around Kagome's annoying nosy girlfriends. (sorry they just irk me and I think Kagome should tell them to 'shove off' or at least to get their own life and quit trying to run hers) I think they should have some quiet time together. Anyway post more soon this is good
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 14:27 CDT
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Cute. ooOOOooo put some high school stuff in it...nah it's been done too many times. Are they seniors? Can they go to clubs yet? Well update soon please. And i don't really care if its fast or slow between them. I can't really make good decsions...-_-' well update soon.
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