| "Replaying History In More Than One Way" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cool story, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like this story and I'm so excited about reading more about it in the future! Have you decided on the couples and I've just missed it? I really love how you had the inu-group "shadow" the YYH group; that is so creative (wish I had thought of it) and very original, at least from my view. Yes, some of the characters are a bit OOC but no one ever gets them perfect and you've done an excellent job of only changing small tiny things when needed. The POV changes are a bit confusing when they are in the same chapter but not so much that its impossible to follow along the plot line. I'm very excited about the next chapter, hope you can get it up soon! Until Next Time...Sfae
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like hiei/kag or kurama/kagome!!!! GREAT JOB ON THE STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
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Reviewed By: Neji [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 08:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
HI!!! Sorry i didnt reply to your email...my family wouldnt let me check my email for 3 days ;_; and i cant go on MSN;_; just to let you know Hiei doesnt cringe he would probably glare back at Kagome....anywayz, poor Kuwabaka(oops^^) to come in at the wrong time and what song did Kagome sing?that all buh bye Update soon!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Trigun.302 On: August 11, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great cliff hanger(Sarcasim) but realy you should finish your story. This is the second time I've reviewed it Sorry but this is one of my favorite stories. Please read mine and Review. Deul pg13 crossover.
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Title: Good so far!
Reviewed By: Tigun.302 On: August 09, 2004 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story I dont have time to finish reading it. So I will write the name down in my journal. You should be realy proud because its a great story. My story not as good as yours. Deul Is the name you should check it out and review maby! I think its crazzzzzy to Kur/Kag together. You should put Shess/Kag. even if hes not in the story. I realy like writing in the Review thingy. My name as a writer is Trigun302. But my Email address was destroyed. So now I have to change everthing and its #@$%^%$*&() me off. I will write another thats not as big. Plese read mine and review thats all I ask.
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Reviewed By: KibethNLI On: August 09, 2004 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
FWEEEE!! Write more asap! And work on your ff.net stories too! I need more stuff to read! ^^
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: black fire angel (not llogged in) On: August 09, 2004 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah you are a great writer. I really think this is a good plot. Nobody really has a fic like this. It's original...in a way. ^-^ Great Chappie update soon.
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Title: r polls still open?
Reviewed By: Depressed On: August 08, 2004 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Umm is Sango/Yusuke a choice?…just asking
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really awesome i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: July 31, 2004 23:06 CDT
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Oh if you would could you read my self insertion fic and tell me if it's good. I'd like an opinion of a great writer like you and someone who isn't in the fic. It's called The Ryuketsu Tournament. Read the first chapter then the 4th. Well Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: July 31, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Love it so far. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! why did you end it there?! you should have naraku waiting at kagome's door; naraku:well, well my little miko, we meet again(then pins her to the wall by her throat with his hand)hand me the jewel if you wish to live or do i need to kill your friends? (kagome touches his arm and tries to purify him) never!! turns and runs while her hands instinctivly go to her neck where the jewel is. hiei and kurama come running at the sound ect. i just spent the last 20 min. invisioning how it could go after what i wrote, i like it!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(you know) On: July 22, 2004 14:52 CDT
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oh, and HIEI/KAGOME ALL THE WAY!! wooooooo! ^^
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: July 22, 2004 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
thanks! ^_^; I love this fanfic! Please update soon!
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