Title: yummy... Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: May 02, 2004 16:12 CDT Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This was SO great!! really! ... but how about a sequell? please?!? that could really be interesting... ^___^
Reviewed By:Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 16:00 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow! I never even saw that twist! It happened so fast it almost gave me whiplash. I think (and boy did that hurt) that this fell into the category of 'My-plot-bunny-slipped-something-into-my-drink-when-I-wasn't-looking'. My stories seem to fall in that category alot...
