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Reviewed By: Amunra On: July 28, 2004 20:22 CDT
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Okay, so this whole Yuai/Yugi thing is worrying me. I can understand Yuai's point of view. I mean, with her background, I doubt she'd want to jump into something that personal willingly. Yugi's reaction, however, does surprise me. Why isn't he interested? I mean, beside the whole Yami thing? I can see him being preoccupied about what's happening with Yami, but somehow I'd thought he'd want to confide in Yuai. I don't know, I'm so confused. *scratches head* Maybe I'm a dreamer, but can't Yugi have both Yuai and Yami? It'd make a pretty cool threesome, don't you think? :o) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:14 CDT
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Who was that person in that last part? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter... freakin' cliffhangers. Poor Yuai, she really has no idea what's wrong. Why is Yugi letting her win? It sounds like he's trying to be more boyfriendy, but that doesn't sound like him. Hmm...update soon!
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Reviewed By: ~Daebird On: July 20, 2004 14:03 CDT
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That was an awesome chapter! Awww, Kaiba is having so much fun with his time off. Wish the same could be said for Yuai and Moku,lol. The scenes between the Yamis and Hikaris were awesome, I applaud you on those. And as for Kaiba's schemers, I thought Duke might have something to do with it since Kaiba did something last story to his assets. Anyway, I can't wait for more, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: July 18, 2004 23:45 CDT
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It just had to be a cliffhanger, didn't it? Sigh... it's okay, though, I'm sure you're going to update this very soon, right? :o) I had a little extra time this weekend so I decided to catch up on this story. I'm glad that I did, because I'm enjoying it very much. You write relationships well, and I'm intrigued by the way Yuai and Yugi's is going. I still adore Kaiba and am glad that you write him a lot. Yami's plan is very intriguing and I was glad to see all three spirits working together for a common goal. I can't wait to see what happens, especially now that the shadows are restless. Thanks for sharing and I hope that you're feeling better!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 13:08 CDT
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What happened to Yugi? Aww, poor guy. O_O Jame is actually looking for more work? Really? It must be pretty boring now that she's organized everything. No Bakura/Ryou lemon? Well, I suppose it'd be hard writing a lemon like that. (the 'how to cast spells during sex' thing.) OK, update soon!^-^
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: July 13, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tamlins-san...You are the *BOMB* *kisses author noisily*. I really enjoy your writing-and I can't wait for the next chapter...Pleas put our darling Kaiba out of his misery and get a secretary that will actually *stay*. I also want my Pharaoh and his hikari to go at it again like bunnies! Come on! And what's up with Yuai? I thought she loved Yugi-sama? In any case, waiting on pins and needles....
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Ah, another wonderful chapter.^-^ Oh, poor Jou! ;_;That explains Serenity a bit... Hehe, Jame has a lot of work to do if she wants to get fired now. Do they actually make Duel monster hair toys? Or did you make them up? Ok, update soon! *stares at computer, waiting for an update*
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Reviewed By: DaeBird [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 12:36 CDT
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Lol, this was the funniest chappie ever since the Faire. The Yamis were so IC and Kaiba...well, the Gods love him again. Aw, Yugi and Yuai are not feeling the chemistry. All the better for Yami, I guess. And since Serenity is a no-show, maybe Tristan could have Yuai. Eh, just a thought. Keep Writing!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:17 CDT
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I was laughing the entire time, even during the parts with Yugi and Yuai.^^ Kaiba must get a lot of bad secretarys huh? This story's gonna have to get pretty dark for me to stop laughing with her around. ^-^
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Title: Hehehe...exploration is fun!
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: July 01, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're most welcome for the assistance. This is getting more and more interesting. I'm curious to know what all that shady business is about though that was in the previous chapter. I might've overlooked something. *rme* BTW, do you have an account on ff.net?
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Title: Gettin hot in here
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: June 28, 2004 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Note: M-A-R-I-K Things seem to be getting pretty serious here don't they? Waitaminute! I thought Yugi was witih Yuai so why did he and Yami fuck? I know Yami's not real to anyone but Yugi and co, but stilll...can ya explain that to me? Isn't that cheating?
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 21:49 CDT
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Torturing innocent characters: makes the reader scream, but it's so much fun! What was that last chapter? Who do they work for? Damn it, I need to know! Ok, I'll wait for the next chapter. Update soon!^-^
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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 06:28 CDT
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Mostly what I hate about OCs is they always either know the character from some random event before the show or are perfect in a way that makes several guys/girls lust after him or her. Yuai, on the other hand is an OC I liked from the beginning becuase I really enjoyed her character development! This chapter was really awesome, and I absolutely loved it! Everything from the slightly angsty beginning, hilarious middle, and sort of fluffy ending was wonderful. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Aaaah! This chapter was really cool! I liked the whole Yami and Yugi thing..and I can't wait to see that Honda sketch! Hehe update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens..I love the way you write ^^ so intriguing!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(this is me...really!) On: June 18, 2004 15:58 CDT
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I'm sorry about you're accident!Hope you're ok now. Yeah, 'Insert Cool Yu-gi-Oh related title' is an awesome fic. ^-^ I'll have to read those other ones.'Lovely day. The sun is shining. The birds are singing. Jo is practicing bondage. What more could a man want?' hehe, my fav. quote so far. Update soon! Oh yeah, OC question. Well, I like OCs tht either suffer a bit, or are insane and hilarious. I don't like it when OCs are always perfect, and everyone likes them. :p
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