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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: July 30, 2004 07:18 CDT
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24 pages?! I usually only write 12! Well, I liked it when it was this length, and I also loved this chapter! I like Kai's last thoughts for some reason too. Is there going to be a lemon in the next chap? I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: July 22, 2004 03:11 CDT
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0_0 Massive twist there... Update soon please! (still too shocked to talk much) 0_0
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Title: wow!O_O
Reviewed By: flamable_devil On: July 21, 2004 05:35 CDT
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Oh y Goodness this was a very inteestina nd confusiong mind u chapter! What a twist!!!Woohopoo i like it *grin* Pls update soons i wanna know what this is all about!! Jen
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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: July 07, 2004 02:14 CDT
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YAY!!! I am SO glad you updated. I loved that lemon! I loved it even more because Kai was actually the uke. I love it when he's the uke. Again, I'm heaps glad that you updated. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kai-lovr On: July 03, 2004 21:11 CDT
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Please update soon. I've been keeping up with this fic, but it's been like ages since you've update like you usually do. I love this fic, and I really love reading it, so please update soon.
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Title: Waii nice!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JennyJenJen On: June 14, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya Kali_Sama!!! *bows* I loved this chapter your just a man!!!!! its so coooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAw Poor Kai getting so distressed like that , hell who wouldnt after all he did and such but luckily Ty-Kun is there for him waii!!!!!! pls update soons okay!!!!! I promise i'll update Mysterious this week!!!!!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: JennyJen On: June 06, 2004 18:01 CDT
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WOOOOWIER ghreat chapter Kali, i really really enjoyed it though Kai scared me a bit O_O lol anyways update soons okay!!!! Jen
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Title: chap 7
Reviewed By: JenJen^^ On: May 31, 2004 04:15 CDT
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O_OP pooooor Rei-Kun!! lol omg thats so mean hahahaha lol like it mwuahahaha and aaaawwww so sweet the kaity moments and ty conbtroling electricity???????????????? wow thats wickerd!!!1 keep it up, screw ff.net they useless anyway and update soon my friend!!!1 *huggles* Jen
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Title: Now that was a loooong tastry lemon aaight^^
Reviewed By: JenJen^^ On: May 18, 2004 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hoily chickens on a stick!!!! O_)O OMG thatw as a loong l;emon dude!!! but very tastefully written aaight, yay for you!!!! *huygs* that was so good to read!!!! *hentai grin* I know im a perv heck who cares im proud of it gnagna *grins* pls update soon Oi that houise was very cool described evenso!!!! update soon!!! Jen
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Title: Hi*waves*
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Said it on ff.net gunna say it again here!!1 I love chappie weight of the world to pieces!!!! love this story to pieces and u had betta update soons!!!!!1 Jen
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: May 10, 2004 00:59 CDT
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That's kind of how I figured Kai and Tyson would react. Now it will be interesting to see if Tyson forgives Kai
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Reviewed By: Rav Rev On: May 09, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could have Tyson's power be the power over the elements, the weather, the ability to control the bitbeast or a combination of the three. Good story. Update soon.
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Title: omethin went wromg*sweatdrop8
Reviewed By: flamabledeviltoolazytosignin^^ On: May 09, 2004 17:39 CDT
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oh whoa!!!!!O_OP explosivemeet up again!!!!1 oi opi ty kun broke kai's nose thjats so.........lol cant help it its cool hehehehehehe but i hope the will come round again!!!!!!!!!!!! keep wririn!!!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Jen- On: May 09, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Title: O_O and u sau i am evil?????
Reviewed By: CrazyJen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you evil evil evil *chants some more* AAARGH a cliffy cliffy i say thats no fair!!!!!!*cries*& lol hgum yah this chappy was niiiiice and long yayayaya!!! i loved it , oh cant wait for the moment whgere ty and kai will meet again, its noit gunna be a good one ???????/ oh dear ai ai ok hum ttyl!!! JennyJen
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