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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 16, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wish this review can or could be longer .... But my daughter is still sick so I only have a minute to check my mail ,So I'll say I love this story and your a great writer and please update again soon ...Please give to the epilepsy foundation so children like my daughter (Jillian)can live longer...I hope I don't in trouble for the epilepsy thing...
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Title: You are an EVIL person!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:14 CDT
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Oh I simply love your fics and this in no exception. I *DO* think you are evil for leaving it off like that and making me wait yet again to know what will happen...especially since you posted this very fic as 6/7+epiloge on the ML. I like the way you worked the background information in for Trieze and Mil...it's interesting and will make a great side story to compliment this one. I just can't believe that you made Howard the vilian though, after all that he's done for Duo, you evil girl! Maybe one of the Doctors would be better...but even that is trivial compared to the story between Duo and Heero. Yeah I'm a sucker for sap, sue me. Although I am beginning to wonder if they will ever get a chance to explore their relationship. But I wouldn't change this story for anything...it's got everything! Please update soon and don't hesitate to write more stories since I love anything you write!
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Reviewed By: unicorn1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far i am really enjoying it. Keep writing i cannot wait to find out what happenes. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:05 CDT
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**SQUEALS** AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! How sweet!!! Just everything!! Awwwww!! *Bounces and huggles Mil really tight** I wanna know da baby's name!! And poor Duo!!! Awww but hee-chan was soo sweet!!!! *Glomps 1x2* Please update soon! ~Wanders off after Shini-chan who hasn't been glomped yet~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 04, 2004 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guess what I'm gonna say? ::wicked grin:: WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! This is brilliant! and yeah, , I love your story, you have to keep it going! AH! really want more!I have written so many reviews I don't know what to say anymore except please update again soon....
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Title: go! keep it up! :)
Reviewed By: xiao_shan On: June 03, 2004 02:18 CDT
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i really lyk how the storey goes.... please add more soon.. and is heero and duo ever going to have a kid? and when will trowa's mate gonna appear? :)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 31, 2004 22:58 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just wanted to say how much I LOVE this story! It is so good that I just had to let you know what a terrific job you are doing and I CAN'T wait to find out what happens next!!! Don't keep me in suspense!! How do you guys write so many fanfics with out getting writers block? Don't you just hate writers block I really don't know how you guys do it... but I'm glad you guys do..I don't know what everyone else thinks but I love this story and I want more please...Update again soon..
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 12:10 CDT
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***SHRIEKS IN TERROR** OMG!!! SHINIGAMI! **Roars Angrily** WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON THE SON OF A MOTHER THAT HURT OUR PUPPY I'LL *Censored* . . . Ahem, excuse me ^.^; Update soon!! Your cliffhangers are absolutely evil!! ~Quickly fetches first aid kit to check poor Shinigami~
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Title: oh I forgot
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:28 CDT
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I was wondering why you didn't post this earlier on the SDDI ML. It wasn't until I remebered the fic 'The Claim' was on MM that I thought to check here, when I saw the Prologue and chapter 1 posted there. You didn't even mention that it was here. But I am so glad I remembered how much I enjoyed the first one so that I could track more chapters down!
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:18 CDT
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I was wondering when you were going to finish this one up. I loved 'The Claim' and this one promises to be just as good as the first! I can't believe that the bartender's mate could be so cruel knowing that he would hve gone through the pain of birth himself...but then again it really shouldn't. People only have heart when they can afford to and they never cease to amaze me. But the fic is really very good and I like the pace of the story. It gives plenty of background info but none of the dull lapses in the pace which is great. I like both the personalities that you have Duo and Heero in also...even if Duo is a little 'weak' so far. But both still hold their characters to a degree. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Gah! Who could it be? Unless it's someone completely new, I'd guess it was Treize and Trowa returning for some reason. I can't imagine Numbnuts' son reaching Howard and returning already, especially when he wasn't sure where the Sweepers are. I just hope it's someone that will let Heero push the sword in a little more...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 21:21 CDT
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. . . Hey I just noticed this after I wrote my review for chapter four. Where is our beloved Shinigami?!?! ~Wanders around looking for Shini-chan~
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 21:15 CDT
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OMG!!! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!! ^__^ LOL!! Wow are you ever good at suspense -- and torture! Poor Milli an Duo. **Snuggles Both Immensely** But YAH for Heero!! *GLOMPS* I hope that was Treize and Trowa who came back!! Please update soon!! ~Wanders away nervously chewing nails~
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Reviewed By: camillian On: May 23, 2004 16:23 CDT
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keep on going! update! need to read what happens next =) !
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Title: NO!! you can't stop here!
Reviewed By: Oneesama ^__^ On: May 23, 2004 14:02 CDT
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write more soon, will ya? what's that Howard guy planing? will Duo and Mil be alright? Can Trowa help the people who got into the avalanche? Please continue!! ^___^
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