| "Timeless Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Specially that last scene there, now update soon! Or waves upon waves of Kimlia Bugs will devour your vocal chords!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 31, 2005 18:59 CDT
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woman that was beautiful... it was so well done... I loved that scene it was great... you need to come check out this site http://s8.invisionfree.com/DBZ_Fanfic_Salon/index.php? if you can... its a great site and lots of dbz fans... wow that was a wonderful chapter you did wonderfully
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 29, 2005 14:14 CDT
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awwwe how cute!
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Reviewed By: Lady Rin9677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 22:23 CST
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Love it! I hope you post the rest of it soon! Great story keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 16:09 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH THAT I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE FINISH AND EVEN THEN ITS GOING TO DRIVE ME INSANE! But Vegeta comes to the rescue! ::smiles:: I don't want them to go back to their time, this one is too interesting; but I'm sure that if they do there is going to be something interesting going on ::smirks:: I love guessing and I love reading your fics so Keep up the amazing work and get the next few chapters out soon! :winks: I'LL BETA THEM FOR YOU IF MICHELLE SLACKS ::smiles innocently:: Not that I'd use that to see whats coming up before anyone else! -Rachel- ::winks:: I'm always open! Lol, jk!
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Title: thank you 4 the tissue
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 19, 2005 15:28 CST
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i needed that, but yhe chappy you posted is the same as the last one is it not?
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:09 CDT
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nooooooooo!!! why bulma go get er self kidnapped by ninjja ?? Vegeta will save her right? im crying
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: June 02, 2004 01:37 CDT
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I like... I'm looking forward to the next chapter... great stuff.
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 26, 2004 00:46 CDT
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good stuff... it was a good choice to give us background info to move the story along and allow for the story to flow better into interactions these girls can now have... I think that it may be time to start their interactions with the boys more and sort of start the relationships while intergrating into the story... like vegeta falling for bulma while she takes the tests.
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 19, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they act like my group of friends, constantly touching and stuff but not meaning anything by it, was that normal that far back in Japanese times? it would be funny to see one of the Vegeta's question it ^^ neways... UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 17, 2004 22:19 CDT
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loved it, I'm addicted, and can't wait for the next update
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Title: timeless beauty reviews
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys On: May 12, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story very original and well documented definitely a keeping come on update ASAP please c
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Reviewed By: Cha Seew Bow On: May 12, 2004 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! i love the plot line so i hope you keep going and update soon
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 11, 2004 22:25 CDT
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great chappie... and cliffy crazy but I can deal... well can't wait for an update
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 10, 2004 22:52 CDT
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hey, another great chapter... can't wait for more
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