| "We meet again" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
this would be a really great fic if you reread ur stories before hand and not write semi sentences. Also make sure people know when u are having dialoge. i would love if you update new chapters AND fixed the chatpers you have. thanx
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is good. I'm just having trouble figuring out were the conversations begin and end. but it's a really good fic so update soon.
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your spelling not so bad, but spacing your words when their speacking would be a good idea and less confusing. All in all this is good
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Reviewed By: Larka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a good story, I'm just having trouble figuring out were the conversations begin and end.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story pls update soon !!!
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