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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 15:52 CDT
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This is a very cute story. Poor chibi-Hiei, he lost the girl he loved...but yeah she gets her memories back. You have a lot of potential as a writer (obvious w/ creative thinking as yours) but you need to pad out or fluff your fics more. Fill the world out, put in details of where they are, what's going. It's a common mistake for people to just want to put in dialogue (especially, like myself, when they can't write action all that well). Try and work on details and different styles of writing. Trust me everyone has to work on this, I'm far from being any good at it and am constantly trying to improve my writing style. But like I said, you have a lot of potential keep at it and I hope to read future updates/fics by you in the future :) Until Next Time...Sfae
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Reviewed By: chibi-staci [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nonono!!! you must continue this story!!!!!! ppppllleeeaaasssseee!!
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Reviewed By: SlplessWitch951 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 03:17 CDT
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Hey there! I thought your story was pretty good so keep at it dear(sorry I call lots of people dear -sweatdrop-...and I'm probably not even older than them...hehe) If you use a microsoft word to type your fics on then nect time you save it, go to save as and instead of a doc, change it to a html and save it as something dif. Afterwards, it would be smart to save your stuff on a floppy so in case the stuff on your comp. is lost (which I've seen many times before) you'll have the floppy. (and save each time you update on the floppy!)
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Reviewed By: Kappa-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved your story! I hope you write a whole bunch more chappies!
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Reviewed By: yashamoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update sooooon it was getting good
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 13:41 CDT
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it's a good story though! Just, I'm not sure if I read the entire chapter or not...
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 13:40 CDT
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... umm, I think something's wrong with the formatting....
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Reviewed By: nekokitsune16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story and i hope u keep updating it
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Title: Support Website
Reviewed By: CrystalEyes SilverWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good so far, just check over your work before you post and try to find the root of the problem. I checked out the strange writing and it said 'Microsoft Word Document', if you go to http://support.microsoft.com/default.aspx you could probably find a solution for your problem. Anyways, like I said, it's good and you got potential, just check over it if you can!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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this would be a really great fic if you reread ur stories before hand and not write semi sentences. Also make sure people know when u are having dialoge. i would love if you update new chapters AND fixed the chatpers you have. thanx
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 15:44 CDT
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This fic is good. I'm just having trouble figuring out were the conversations begin and end. but it's a really good fic so update soon.
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your spelling not so bad, but spacing your words when their speacking would be a good idea and less confusing. All in all this is good
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Reviewed By: Larka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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It's a good story, I'm just having trouble figuring out were the conversations begin and end.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story pls update soon !!!
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