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Reviewed By: PlatonMines [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2020 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the over 100 words of ANs and disclaimers describing how
much you'd have the g-boys bone if you owned the franchise I adore
the fic opening with The Bad Touch, which made this whole
experience all that more surreal, cause I just heard it for the
first time recently. I adore Duo just casually mentioning how he's
the only gay dude in town. Just, same. I love how Heero asks for a
2004 corvette, which in 2004 makes him sound very big and fancy,
but to a 2020 mind just sounded like he wanted a used car I adore
the line "I like sleek fast cars. Same way I like the guys I fuck."
It's possibly the greatest line written by man or woman I adore
everything about this, top to bottom, from the tops to the bottoms.
My God.
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 22:26 PDT
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Oh, that story was so funny...in a dirty way. Pure gratuity at its worst! And what makes it even better is the flame written by some homophobic, Corvette-obsessed...um..."Christian". But come on! Who doesn't know that a Corvette is a sex-magnet?
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Reviewed By: mcjewelfiend [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 17:14 PDT
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Oh my gosh did some christian write really write that? Ok, first off you realise that if they clicked on in and wrote on there all that crap they actually looked for it? Good grief! I'm a christian too and no I dont think you deserve to die and go to hell and all that crap. Whoever wrote that needs to get a life and removed the stick that crawled up their your know what. I have no problem with gay couples and support you!
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Reviewed By: Riveth On: November 02, 2004 19:56 PST
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Hey, finally got the chance to read the flame you told me about. I have three things to say, YOU GO GIRL!! Look two explainations. Hey I'll go to hell with you. I've always say it would be more fun in hell. We probably could find some hot gay sex. In fact we should drag the flammer to hell and toutore him and make him watch the hot gay sex. *evil crakle* Okay see you later and keep writin gay smut.
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Title: ohmigid
Reviewed By: Eternalflames [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did someone seriosuly write that flame?!!! Bloody hell I thought my parents were stupid but come on! Oh dear according to them I'm going to hell cause I write heero/duo, then again like u say they are horny little dudes who spend most of gundam fan fics in general romping. And if I'mdamned to hell there is a lot of others so hell is gonna be full when our generation dies hah hah! Plus great story, the aeroglide bit, v amusin plus love da song!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: September 15, 2004 08:19 PDT
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How close minded can you be! stupid flame! i mean love is love right? if god was so against it it wouldnt exsist ether, it isnt fair to judge people just because they like the same gender, AND isnt wishing someone dead a sin to? NOW WHO'S GOING TO HELL! stupid flamer! if you didnt like this stuff you SHOULDNT EVEN HAVE READ IT! btw good story ^.~
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Reviewed By: evilchild not signed in On: September 14, 2004 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You tell him! I had someone flame me for my 'This is my life' fic and I quickly erased it because it was something you just don't do! The flamer went under the name Riku and hoped that I get raped and forced to give oral sex so I can see how Tai and Inuyasha, from my other fic, would feel. That was dumb on that person's part. How can you possibly know what a fake person is feeling? But I'm not worrying about it because just like when that boy said when he flamed you about you and everyone else who write like this is going to hell, he and Riku are too. You don't spite others and wish that they die or get raped. God don't like ugly. They keep talking like that and that same thing will come and bite them in ass hard. Any way, I loved the fic. I wouldn't mind being locked up in a room with them. He he! That would be fun! You just keep on writing!
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Title: seven7
Reviewed By: saturnssavior [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 13:59 PDT
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that jackass!! you tell him girl! keep writing your fics are good and do it just to piss the guy off even more!^_~ love this fic, I myself am a camaro person but i still love this fic. luv ya seven7
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Title: MelCynt
Reviewed By: MelCynt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 13:14 PDT
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You tell him girl!! Look, two exclamation marks. I'm serious! Yaoi's just *fun*!
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: September 12, 2004 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! And I totally believe in jesus too! To us yaoi fans, you are a gift from god. The fic is just great, it is straightforward, super sexy. 1x2 forever!
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Reviewed By: jstar On: September 11, 2004 23:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I wanna be in that room!! You can lock me in there!! Please!! And I LOVED your story!! You think if we stole that jackasses Corvette we could entice a couple of pretty boys to come fuck in it? That I would pay to see!! Just ignore the small minded moron and reek your revenge by writing more fabulous stories!!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is a great fic and boy is it hot and straght to the point*blushes thinking about it*.I hope to read a longer smut of your someothe time. Keep up the good work.^_^
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Reviewed By: Riveth On: September 11, 2004 11:54 PDT
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Hey, Aria. I love this story. Very sexy. I'll never look at a corvette the same way. Oh ya, that song you put in that I was singing. It is "Bad Touch" by the "Blood Hound Gang." I'm glad that I influence such a good story. See you later.
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Reviewed By: MelCynt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:26 PDT
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Hey! That fic was so hot! And funny too. I'm gonna wait a bit to read your other fic, coz I recently read a fic of that sort, and I was just crying all over the keyboard. Felt a bit depressed afterwards. But I'm definitely gonna read it! Hope you write more hentai stuff, you're good at it. Ja ne
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