| "A Father Again" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. Really, it was hear warming. It's a tricky thing to portray Vegeta as caring for his wife and chidren deeply without making him OOC and you navigated that treacherous road with ease. And thank you for the dedication. We're thrilled you joined us.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 05:51 EDT
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Ohhhh - I really enjoyed that! Very well written and plausible :D Eh, I'm a pitiful reviewer, I can never think of anything vaguely intelligent or insightful to say, so I'll just ask you to do more... A nice Bardock story perhaps... :D
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 05:18 EDT
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Wow! Debbie... I have no words for this other than - breathtaking! I was completely captured from begining to end. You nailed both characters so absolutely that I stopped reading and started seeing instead. You've left me speechless. *Pounces on Vegeta and the ice-cream before Bulma gets back.*
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Reviewed By: casina On: May 08, 2004 03:43 EDT
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absolutely lovely.
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