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"Trust and Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ]
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 Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH HIEI PUNK 31!!! I totally agree!! Yes, she hates Hiei, she puts it in every single review on my fics. I know, what did Hiei ever do to her??
 Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 14:41 CDT
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i still can't believe u did that...
 Reviewed By: Hiei punk 31 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 14:35 CDT
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I'm with Frozen Flame on this one... WHY DID YOU MAKE HIEI DIE!!!!??? Do you hate him or something? what did he ever do to you?
 Title: Even though Hiei died I'll give you a 10.... HIEI!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hiei punk 31 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! You made HIEI DIE!!!! I hate you!!!!!!!!!!! Just Kidding... ^_^ Karasu is a pervert in my opinion but great fic! Keep writing! O B is kinda cool. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2004 20:32 CDT
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 Title: How DARE you?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIEI?!?!?! *sniff* Oh, I hate you now. He would NEVER save Karasu like that. NEVER! Karasu deserved to die!! NOT HIEI!!!! But other than that the story is pretty good. Cool. But before I go I must say...I HATE KARASU!!!
 Reviewed By: Orlando Bloom Karasu Lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2004 16:11 CDT
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 Reviewed By: Akatriel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2004 09:16 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Post the rest of it already!!! I already know what you're going to do *sob* MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Deathlady [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2004 16:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I have never seen a fic That dosn't have Karasu as a bad guy besides Drof. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOOOOOON!
 Reviewed By: Akatriel [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2004 20:05 CDT
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AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to update?!?!? You know how long I've been waiting?
 Reviewed By: Akatriel [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 11, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pretty cool fanfic O.K.! Um...just one thing though. Karasu's not powerful enough to kill Toguro. You're gonna say "Well, I say so!" or "Yes he could!" even though he couldn't. Stick to the facts, honey, because otherwise no one else will understand or like your fics. Sorry, I'm just saying what I think. YYH IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: when are you writing more?
Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2004 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really love this, but you've gotta write more. The plot is really good. I just saw the episode with Kurasu vs. Kurama yesterday, and that makes this fanfic even cooler. I don't usually see fanfics about Karasu...it's about time someone wrote one. Keep writing!!! And stop it with the I HATE HIEI in your reviews on my fics already!!!
 Title: Why do you hate Hiei?!?
Reviewed By: Frozen Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2004 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it so far!! When are you writing more? I want more!! More!!! MORE!!!! Thanks for the reviews on Clay's Day in Spirit World and Dreams of Despair. I have some other ones now...come read and review!! By the way why do you hate Hiei?!?! I love Hiei!!! HIEI HIEI HIEI!!!! Karasu's not my favorite character, but I don't go around saying I HATE KARASU now do I? Oops, I just said it. Oh, well. What's so great about Karasu anyway? I can't wait for more of this fic...it's so cool!! Peace out!! Frozen Flame
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