| "The Last Lifeline" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 10:24 CDT
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Damn. Naraku is one dead bastard. I completely forgot all the bad stuff naraku did to her friends and Inu Yasha. Man I think this Naraku is more demented then the anime and manga version. lol. Great chapter though dark. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: chibi-staci [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooohhhh!!! you so have to update soon!!! i cant wait to find out what happens!! please update soon! -staci
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Reviewed By: Rumiko Takahashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story. You must update soon. I can't wait. I'm beating myself up wondering what's going to happen. UPDATE SOON!! I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG MY SISTER CAN HOLD ME BACK, FROM SCREAMING MY HEAD OFF!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:08 CDT
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Damn. Great chapter and twist. Keep up the good work... How does Naraku know her and she not know him? Did he cause the accident that killed her father? What was it for if he did it? How does Inu Yasha know Naraku? What is his agenda?
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh cliffies kill me !!!! haha Please update soon !!!!!!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: fudge On: July 07, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was intense I really like this story I hope you update soon. REALLY soon! Keepup the amazing work. :)see ya! karen
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo good !!!!! Cant wait to find out what happens next !!!
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Title: holy crap!!!!!
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really really really really really really great chappie and hope you up-date the first chance you get^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very hilerous(or how ever you spell it)chappie and can't wait till you up-date again so i can read more^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool way to find out she's a miko it's different yet the same and the chapter was very very very great and enjoyable hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very wonderful story so far and hope you up-date soon so i can read more^_^
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Title: "You may not look it, but you're a real smart-ass."
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey Rini wini! nice chappies! I love your story so far and i really like the direction this story is going! I wuv you! Good job! (For the grammar ans spelling...firy. hahahaha)
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's pretty good, and I hope you keep updating pretty regularly.. *shivers* Inuyasha underneath the hood of a car.. oh beautiful!! *drools*
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Title: You suck
Reviewed By: Ariel (Guess which one) On: May 09, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RINI, YOU SO SUCK FOR MAKNG ME READ THAT! I bawled my friggin' eyes out and now my keyboard is wet! But, I must say so myself, that was REALLY awesome, great job on your new story Rini! I hope it works out and you get lots and lots and lots of visits and reviews!
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