| "Star Palace Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: Forgot somethings
Reviewed By: Saisu On: June 24, 2004 16:55 CDT
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I forgot to put what he controls. Well, he controls light, dark, water, wind, fire and grass. I know weird but he's from an alternate world. Each is divided equally. He wears a simple soft silvery blue tunic and white slacks. (it's not what he always wears, I just wanted him without the futureristic clothing)
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Title: Forgot something
Reviewed By: Sasiu On: June 24, 2004 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I forgot to put what sort of power he has and what he's wearing. Red Chinese tunic with white slacks and he has light,dark,fire,water,earth,grass and wind powers. Each divided equally.
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Reviewed By: Sasiu On: June 09, 2004 14:53 CDT
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Hey, can I be in this fic if there's room left? If yes here's my character's bio. Name: Akira Kurama Himura (don't get mad about the middle name, and I mean Mt. Kurama in Japan) Age: 22; 3003 (he's a youko) Appearence: over 7' 3", has waist length silvery reddish, blackish brown hair and tilted sapphire blue eyes. Personlity: calm, quiet, friendly, shy, intelligent; he's someone you would NOT want make angry at times.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter ^^ *wakes to the other Jasmine* Well anyways hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Jasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:37 CDT
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Please put up another chapter b4 u go. I want to see more. I have a very vivid imagination so i can imagine everything. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please
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Title: forget it
Reviewed By: Chaos Zeta On: June 02, 2004 08:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
nah forget my last post, it's just stupid
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Reviewed By: Red moon wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 22:35 CDT
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Hi ya! my characters (the one i use ina ll my stories i never posted) name is haruko Uzumaki she long waist lenght raven black hair she has acid green/yellow eyes and uses Fire, water and darkness as powers and she can turn into a white wolf she is the godess of the moon and stars she is somwwhat timid ywt watchful and is a rookie all the way and if you choose me PLZ PAIR ME WITH SAKAKI cause he is so..BISHOUEN MATERIAL
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:06 CDT
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can you do me a favor and let Rhianna drop obrion i kinda killed in one of my stories and it wouldn't fit if he wher still alive in this story.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Fox2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put up the next chapter! Please! This is getting good and I mean really good!
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Reviewed By: Chaos Zeta On: June 01, 2004 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My name is Random Man, i have power over complete randomness. My eye color is sky blue and my hair is colored silver and reaches to the middle of my back. I have a Boa Constrictor familiar. He he he. Use me...Please?
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Title: sorry again!!
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 03:03 CDT
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To all of my loyal readers... sorry for taking so long in updating!! I really did try to wirte, but my brain wasn't functioning correctly, and my brother laughed at me... *sigh* I hate dentists... they don't even know how annoying it is to have half of your face numbed... they will never know the true embarrassment of drooling on yourself and not even knowing it until someone points it out to you... that's really bad...
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:40 CDT
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^^;; I forgot Diana's personality... she's very kind to others, very caring to her lover and is willing to do anything to save him if he was in danger. Oh yeah and her powers are to heal... ok well got to go see ya!
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Title: Can I try if it's not too late...
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi... I really love this fic... I should of reviews sooner, but my shyness kicked in ^^;; ok first off I want my yami Diana to do this ok? Well Diana should be called the Goddess of life and destiny ^^ anyways she has long blond hair, light blue eyes and her skin is very soft kind of like snow in a way ^^; She loves to wear the color white so her dress is pure white and people would think that she's an angel at first... She is in love with Dark Magician (Also known as one of the Pharaoh's priest... His name back then was Mahaado so you can call him that if you want ^^;;) That's it I think... well I hope you update soon! I really love this story... Oh yeah Mahaado and Diana might... well you know... 'do it' ^^;; well got to go see ya!
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Reviewed By: Saru Jinx-chan On: May 29, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Hmmm.... This could be intresting. I AM THE ALL POWERFULL MOKKI!! GODDESS OF MONKEY DEMONS AND WEATHER. Ooooookay... that was wierd. Anyway, I am kinda young and have long knee-length purple hair. my eyes are a kind of honey color. I love to*takes big breath* eat chocolate,listen to music, be ditzy, be odd, flirt with guys, have odd fantasies about Hiei/Kurama/Yoko/Yuuske/Inuyasha/Shessomaru, and play with my boomarangs*exhales* Has random thoughts and very awkward mood swings. I am quite friendly and loves shooting stars. Can be kind of insane, but is seirious when I want to be. Please pick me!!! it would make me very happy ^_________^
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Reviewed By: Sakura girl 01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:37 CDT
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name:Aumi power:the power of eath vines etc. eyecolor:violet hair:dark blue boyfriend:Sanosuke She is Sora's sister.
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