| "Star Palace Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: anne bolyen On: July 29, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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heres a goddeses.Eris goddeses of chaos strife destruction hate envy bringer of wars.Her hair is night black she wears greek type of clothes exepet there black and has green eyes.carries a golden apple the apple of discord just toss the apple and chaos and trouble happens.Loves to cause chaos she started all the wars and breakups and fights in the universe.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Jasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:56 CDT
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Hey ^_^ you finally updated..glad you finally updated...I was wondering when you would come back...well...hope i still get to be in it (kitgirl), anyway update soon...cant wait 2 see who makes it ^_________^...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Pancakes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 18:13 CDT
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*blows party popper* yay! your finally updated! ^-^ i thought you were gonna give up on the fic or something... >_> BUT you didn't! YAY! *glomps Sesshy* she updated! ain't that just beautiful?! [Sesshy: @.@] err... he'll be fine! (insert shifty glances) =====Chi/Bloody======
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Title: Forgot somethings
Reviewed By: Saisu On: June 24, 2004 16:55 CDT
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I forgot to put what he controls. Well, he controls light, dark, water, wind, fire and grass. I know weird but he's from an alternate world. Each is divided equally. He wears a simple soft silvery blue tunic and white slacks. (it's not what he always wears, I just wanted him without the futureristic clothing)
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Title: Forgot something
Reviewed By: Sasiu On: June 24, 2004 16:49 CDT
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I forgot to put what sort of power he has and what he's wearing. Red Chinese tunic with white slacks and he has light,dark,fire,water,earth,grass and wind powers. Each divided equally.
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Reviewed By: Sasiu On: June 09, 2004 14:53 CDT
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Hey, can I be in this fic if there's room left? If yes here's my character's bio. Name: Akira Kurama Himura (don't get mad about the middle name, and I mean Mt. Kurama in Japan) Age: 22; 3003 (he's a youko) Appearence: over 7' 3", has waist length silvery reddish, blackish brown hair and tilted sapphire blue eyes. Personlity: calm, quiet, friendly, shy, intelligent; he's someone you would NOT want make angry at times.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter ^^ *wakes to the other Jasmine* Well anyways hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Jasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 14:37 CDT
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Please put up another chapter b4 u go. I want to see more. I have a very vivid imagination so i can imagine everything. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please
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Title: forget it
Reviewed By: Chaos Zeta On: June 02, 2004 08:56 CDT
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nah forget my last post, it's just stupid
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Reviewed By: Red moon wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 22:35 CDT
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Hi ya! my characters (the one i use ina ll my stories i never posted) name is haruko Uzumaki she long waist lenght raven black hair she has acid green/yellow eyes and uses Fire, water and darkness as powers and she can turn into a white wolf she is the godess of the moon and stars she is somwwhat timid ywt watchful and is a rookie all the way and if you choose me PLZ PAIR ME WITH SAKAKI cause he is so..BISHOUEN MATERIAL
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:06 CDT
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can you do me a favor and let Rhianna drop obrion i kinda killed in one of my stories and it wouldn't fit if he wher still alive in this story.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Fox2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put up the next chapter! Please! This is getting good and I mean really good!
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Reviewed By: Chaos Zeta On: June 01, 2004 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My name is Random Man, i have power over complete randomness. My eye color is sky blue and my hair is colored silver and reaches to the middle of my back. I have a Boa Constrictor familiar. He he he. Use me...Please?
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Title: sorry again!!
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 03:03 CDT
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To all of my loyal readers... sorry for taking so long in updating!! I really did try to wirte, but my brain wasn't functioning correctly, and my brother laughed at me... *sigh* I hate dentists... they don't even know how annoying it is to have half of your face numbed... they will never know the true embarrassment of drooling on yourself and not even knowing it until someone points it out to you... that's really bad...
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:40 CDT
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^^;; I forgot Diana's personality... she's very kind to others, very caring to her lover and is willing to do anything to save him if he was in danger. Oh yeah and her powers are to heal... ok well got to go see ya!
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