| "A Slave to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: white fanged wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:49 CDT
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sorry that i am so late in updating. my evil, mean, stepdad shut off the internet. stupid bastard! oh well, i am reviewing now! the chapter was amaizing, and the lemon was really good for your first full one. you are an amizing authoress and i am glad that this story is going so far. please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: WingBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story keep it up
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:46 CDT
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I am sooo sorry. My computer is soo not cooperating. *bangs it against wall* Girrr, stupid hunk o' junk!!! Alright! Now I am ready to review. This chappie was a little short, but it was still wonderful. I loved it so much, just like I love all of your chapters and your writing!! ~White Fanged Wolf
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Reviewed By: white Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:43 CDT
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 18:38 CDT
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Sorry, having a bit of an issue loging in at the moment. Stupid piece of crap!! Ok, loved it. Now you have to update...or is that what the other email is for....? Oh crap! You mean I have to go through this....again!?! Ohhhhhhh. Gir. Ok. I am going to go review the other chapter now!
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Reviewed By: Ivanova On: June 03, 2004 15:26 CDT
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it was reallyy good please put more of yami/zaire and i hope you don't intend to kill zaire cause they make a good couple. :D keep going.
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 16:37 CDT
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Ok, tell me the truth, you're happy to see me-huh? I know it is true....Ok, you already know what I am going to say, but I'll say it anyways. I loved it, and I want you to continue. It is waaaay to good not to be continued! Teehee, I have no clue what else to say, there just is simpily not enough words that could touch on the greatness of the story. ~ White Fanged Wolf
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Okiey-dokiey. I'm glad that I am not annoying you. I thank you for saying that I am your motivation for writing. That makes me feel sooo much better about myself, but this isn't about me-it is about YOU!!! Well then, this was positively amazing. Need I say more?!? YES!! ILOVE THE STORY, AND YOU MUST WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW. I comand it! Muwahahahaha! *Mischivious smirk* Ok-now that that is out of my system....please continue your extrodanary stroy-hehe, that sounds funny.
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Reviewed By: Carbuncle_Ruby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 05:19 CDT
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Oh great leave my hangging... :( lol Can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 22:31 CDT
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WOOHOO!! A new chapter that was just pure genious. I REALLY love the story so far. I want you to cnotinue the story so that I can continue enjoying, OH Favorite Auothor of mine. *Sighs and hangs head* You probably get really tired at hearing from me all of the time. I am really sorry if I annoy you in any way, shape, or form, but I REALLY, REALLY like this story....please continue. *Wink*
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Now you are going to make me cry! I don't want to cry! Damn! *Eyes start watering* I really loved this chapter. It was sooo good. *Eyes continue to water* I hate crying, but you do such a good job of bringing emotions to the surface. It is a phenominal story, and I feel honered, and privileged that you mention me. I really think you are a great author, and you should be peged as such. You bring everything to life, and few are as good at doing what you do. I cannot wait until the next chapter, please make it soon! ~White Fanged Wolf
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:21 CDT
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Awwww, I love you too! ^_^ I feel sooo lucky to be considered one of your favorite reviewers, that brightened my day! Ok, the story....I have three simple words for you: I LOVED IT!!!! It was simply wonderful, and that doesn't even begin to do it justice. I love how you made your charaters so different and life-like. If I had to guess, I would say that your personality lies somewhere inbetween the three of them. They are just too real to be completely fictional. I really love Laive, she is my favorite. Cocky, hardheaded, and very easy to see that she is not somebody that you would want to mess around with. I am glad that I found this story, because when ever I read your new chapters, they always seem to make me feel better. Please keep up the great work, and update soon, ~White Fanged Wolf
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Reviewed By: Carbuncle_Ruby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, Can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did much better with keeping everything inline this chapter. It was very enjoyable, many smiles came from reading it; and I feel esspesially honored to be mentioned in your story. Thank you very much. The name just sort of came to me, I really didn't thimk about it refering to 'Wolf's Rain' but now that you mention it, it does sort of fall in line there doesn't it? In the second chapter, the mix-ups came in the first couple of paragraphs, and the middle. I don't really remember the exact location, but they are around that area. Hope that that helps.
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 13:43 CDT
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If youu read my last review, then the rating stayed the same, there was just two extra issues: You confused some of your chatacters in the story. But other than that, I honestly enjoyed reading it and I hope that you decide to update soon. That would make me VERY happy. *wink* Love the way the story flows, it just seems to fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. I can't wait until I can read another chapter from this story!!!!
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