| "Yugi's Attempt" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:06 CDT
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Random guy that lives on the street that is stalking Johanna: ( eyes shift about the place) Yes, You do
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:06 CDT
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..O.o I talk to myself?
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:05 CDT
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Random voice from the land of randomness where johanna was probably made: Yes you are Johanna
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:05 CDT
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..I write that?
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:05 CDT
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Hullo! ^-^ I feel sweet! Like usaull!!! ( Huggles Yami plushie) I have idea for you Hope! How about we all get turned into animals! ^-^ Im a neko!! Or, Maybe Yami AND I TORTURE THAT FREAKIN BLOODY F******* TOMBROBVBER TILL HE F****** SHUTSUP AND F****** LEAVES ME AND YAMI ALONE BEFORE I BLOODY F****** BEATS THE BLOODY PULP OUT OF HIM ANFD HES A BLOODY F****** PULP ON THE FLOOR ALL BLOODY AND RED AND ALL SQUISHY AND KILL LIKEY THING AND I CAN STRAP HIM TO AN ELECTRIC CHAIR AND ELECRATUTE HIM TILL HIS EYES POP OUT AND HE DIES A HORRIBLE, GRULY DEATH AND PLACE HIM ON A ISLAND TO SEPERATE HIM FROM US AND ALL THE EVIL NINGA TURTLES COME AND BEAT HIM UP FROM THE SEA AND BEAT HIM TO A BLOODY PULP!! YEAH!!!...Oh..I think I said bad words..Im sorry I WUV THE STORY HOPE! MUST CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 02:59 CDT
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..My hand...is stuck? ...Oh.....Why me.....Oh well....CAN YOU PUT MY BELL IN ONE OF THE CHAPTERS!! AND CAN I LIKE, CAUSE HAVOC TO BAKA AND MARIK!!!!!! since I hate their guts so much..actully...Let me just do TORTURE TO MARIK!! I HATE HIM I HATE HIM FOREVER!!!!!! PLEASE LET YAMI AND I TORTURE THAT FREAKIN IDIOT OF A TOMB KEEPER!!!!! HES BLOODY RUDE NOT WAITING FOR YAMI WHEN HE WAS SPPOSE TO!! AND BY RA ILL KILL HIM IF I GOT THE CHANCE TO KILL MARIK!! I TRULLY BLOODY WOULD!!!!!!!! ( holds a random piccie of Marik and rips it into little peices) WHO WANTS A PEICE OF ME??!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 02:47 CDT
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OH OH! I THINK BAKA IS A BAT!!!!!!! DO I GET A COOKIE? ( sweet smile) YAMI!! ( glomps the word Yami) IM JOHANNA! PEOPLES!! COME TO MY LAIR OF RANDOMNESS FANFICTIONS!!!!!! YOU PROBABLY WONT MAKE IT OUT ALIVE! OR SANE FOR THAT MATTER!!!! HULLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Glomps Hope, Emma, Kathryn and YAMI!!) YEAH!!!! GO YAMI!!!..Im sorry, Im eating suagr..AND LOTS OF IT
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Reviewed By: Yamis Wife [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 02:28 CDT
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...O__O Hullo Hope! ^-^ I like this story! Im very awfully sorry that I wasnt on MSN in the morning and the afternoon on saturday I really am, Im really sorry,I WIKE THIS STORY! BAKA IS VERY NICE TO YOU!..as in, he thinks your story is crap? Jeez, nice wording, Well, Bye byes!
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Tega [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe... Kathryn is going to Maim you... Yes she is! Do I get a cookie again? I do like how this sotry is going ^^
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Reviewed By: Insanity Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 20:25 CDT
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O____O
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Reviewed By: Rika_12339 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I review ur bloddy story.........DON'T YOU DARE MAKE ANY F***ING THING HAPPEN TO ME!!! OR I SWEAR YOU WILL PAY FOR IT WITH THE REST OF YOUR LIFE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Insanity Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:38 CDT
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Oh thankiez u all so much!! *hugs reviewers*It means soo much!
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Reviewed By: Tega [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Yugi eyes* PLEASE WRITE MORE! *eats soggy cookies*
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Reviewed By: Rika_12339 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOLS AS STORY! FINISH PLEASE!! I don't even want to THINK about what they're gonna do!!!!
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Insanity Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:31 CDT
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^______________^I am running out of idea's! *Squeaks* help is needed!! BADLY!
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