| "Monster" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 00:21 CST
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I really don't know If I like this fic. I realize that that is odd to say in a review. It's the only thing that has kept me from reviewing before. I love Kakarrot portrayls. I really like your writing style. This fic, however, highly disturbs me. Yet, I read every update. I've read all the chapters on AFF. I stop reading when I can't take anymore. Yet, somehow, I am drawn to read more whenever I see the title flash across the screen despite how much I try to resist clicking the link. I'm not sure if thats a symptom of my sick demented mind or a complement to your wrighting. Take it however you wish. I wish I could say more but I just don't know If I like this fic.
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Title: Love of Vegeta
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1037 VISITS AND ONLY 8 REVIEWS?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?!?! Heh, sorry, I just hate it when I see a fic I KNOW is one of the best fanfictions EVER but people are too LAZY to rewards a fantastic authors hard work. NEway, like I said this is one of the most original, wierd, scary, disturbing but enjoyble stories on the net, and I hate to love it. But I do. The reason I wasn't able to find this before now is because I was typing 'Camaro' into the search instead of 'Camaro Forever' *smacks head* didn't think of typing in Monster. I hope you begin to post your other stories on here as well, and don't be discouraged by the lazy buggers on this site, you know you're good and you know we all love it. Even those flamers can't deny that (if they even bother to READ your stories)! Anyway Cya Camaro! ~Jess
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:45 CST
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hey Camaro, I started reading this story shortly before I "met" you because I was looking for braver characterizations of Goku and someone recommended it. Right away your poetic and fluid style lures a reader into the story. Like Fathoming Love (the only other story of yours I've read), there's a lot of effort put into the atmospheric elements of the story and I have to say that's where your real talent is--setting up a scene, creating the emotional drama with highly evocative language. Part of me wants the story to move faster (ie, cut through some of the language) but I'm not sure you wouldn't lose a lot of your distinct style that way. My only suggestion at this point would be to keep your a/ns to a minimum or cut them out altogether--I think they distract from you story, which should speak for itself. *shrugs* But the style is beautiful and the story original. You are a unigue talent.
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Reviewed By: geta_gfan On: January 29, 2005 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story.I've already read a buch of chapter 'till chapter 33, and I wonder if u will only update your story here.I mean that if I have to wait all over again 'till that chapter to see what happens.I really want to know what will happen after that chapter and please update there soon.
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 00:15 CST
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grrrr *creativity *compelled *spelled right I always notice the error of my ways after posting. Hind-sight's 20/20 I guess...
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 00:13 CST
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Your style of writing is good enough to be found in a book, or can be used, as aijou_tsuneni_mukei said as poetry. I have only read the first chapter, but the fluency and vreativity of your voice comppelled me to review now. You do have an interesting POV (point of view) and, unlike many fanfiction "authors" you can actually call yourself a writer. I love the lack of spelling errors, it signifies that you actually read your story before posting it. Yokudekimashita! Keep up the good work! 3oclock_Tangerine P.S. I agree about the review thing, I hate authors who put in a beg column (is that spelledright?) at the end of their fic: highly annoying.
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Title: aijou_tsuneni_mukei
Reviewed By: aijou_tsuneni_mukei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its that this story is just great...its so fluent in its wording the whole thing melds together yet each paragraph stands out on its own...i always love how it sounds when someone gives details on the muder wepon...the only way i can describe it as poetry pure poetry...well theres my little review i cant wait for more also i think you just changed the ending to my yugioh fic lol i tend to draw insperation from every fic i read and yours tells me i need to add some beautiful gore lol
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Reviewed By: Kageko On: July 01, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey!! thanx for the site. unfortunatly it's not loading properly but i did manage to get to chapter 7. this is such a great story, i can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: kageko On: June 17, 2004 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is sick, and twisted, nad horrifying, and i absolutly love it! lol, there's just somthing about it thathas me hooked. the perspective sort of reminds me of the character in the tell tale heart. my e-mail is kageko@vampirefreaks.com send me the story when u get done with it so i don't have to hunt for it kay? ;)
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Reviewed By: Anouk On: June 02, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I didn't write a revieuw cause this story is just WEIRD. Didn't know what to say after the first chappie, or the second... It's a horror story, and I like horror. I was wondering if Goku would change or something. or be a hero. he is far from it, so this story is different. I think it's a good story...finally that dumbass does something bad :)
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