| "Loves a Mystery w/the YuGiOh Cast" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Wow... That chapter was really good and I was so worried when that guy shot... well you know... Still it was very good... Maura: Yeah it is really good... Jasmine: Oh Maura did Mokuba kiss you? Maura: *blushes* Well... no. Jasmine: Well cause in your past you did kiss him and you even got to make out with him back then. Maybe that will happen again ^_~ Maura: *blushes* You, the author and Seto are going to spy on us I'm guessing... Jasmine: Well maybe... well I better go *whispers* lets see if Mokie and Maura do kiss or make out! Maura: What did you say? Jasmine: Oh nothing... update soon! ^^
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Title: Good Fic
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put me in all of your chapters. I want to be with Yami so bad. Me and him make a good couple.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: I loved it and I hope to find out what happends next! Oh Maura what did you tell Mokuba? Maura: I... I... said that I... love him... Jasmine: O.O But you just met!!! Maura: I know, but something inside me tells me that I loved him before... but I remember that Hera hated my being with Mokuba... she would beat me... I don't want to get rekilled... Jasmine: Don't worry you'll be ok... well I better go... hope you update soon!
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jasmine: ^^ Yeah I think you should change the title... it fits in with the story so that title works. *frees Maura from that belt* You ok? Maura: I think so... I could not breath in that thing... Jasmine: At least Hera won't bother us... at least for now... Oh well hope you update soon... so that way Mokuba can see Maura *winks at Maura* Maura: *blushes* Jasmine: ^_~ See ya!
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Title: yellow!! me again...
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
WELL SHOULD I CHANGE THE TITLE OR NOT?! I just really need to know...and don't worry Maura i'll save you, Jasmine too! Tamra: *appears out of nowhere in front of Hera* You know for doing this to my reviewers/friends you are gonna pay! *kicks her in the head and she falls to the ground unconscious* One down and no more to go!!! *Frees Maura and Jasmine then disappears from sight*
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Title: Hera: Ok...
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Hera: Hello again... and yes I still got Jasmine and Maura in my control... anyways that title sounds good for this story... Although I'm not into romance, but oh well ^^ Jasmine: *chained up* Help she's crazy!!!! Hera: *pans Jasmine (well me...) again* ^^ much better don't you think? Jasmine: x_x Maura: Let us go! I want to see Mokuba! Hera: Not in your life! *tightens the belt with her Magic* Maura: Can't... breath... help...*faints* Hera: ^^ oh well who cares about them... hmm maybe *looks at Maura* I'll kill the young one... oh well update soon or else Maura is dead. Jasmine: *wakes up* NOOOOO!!!! Hera: *sighs* I'll kill her later... oh well better go ^^ see you soon! Oh and tell Mokuba that princess Maura will die very soon ^-^ Jasmine: I hate you Hera... well hope you decide on the title I just hope I can save us all... see ya...
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Title: That was a good chap.
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
*imagines Kaiba wearing that outfit* *dies* That was good. Yes. I would change the title. It would sound better. *hugs* You need to keep writing. 'Tis good. And, Maura, I'll get the letter to Mokuba for you if Tamra can't! I have my ways...*evil smile*
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Title: Yamifanner
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yamifanner: i will be putting you in my story, but only for a brief moment....i am sorry, but at least you are in the fanfic. I am also sorry to say, but i won't be putting a nineth millennium item in my story....i really don't want you to be mad at me...it's just that, i really had something else planned and adding something i didn't intend on putting in my fanfic, kind of srews up the guideline. Please don't be mad at me. ~Tamra
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Reviewed By: Poizenthornz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. That last chapter is cute. Actually all of them are so far nice. Keep it up.
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Title: maybe
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll try to put you in the fic: yamifanner...but there's (as i said) no guarentee..cuz i am trying to follow a guide line that i already (not) set out...but i'll try...you know me..trying to do whats best for my readers...*sweat drops* ~Tamra
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Title: Bored... *gets hit on the head* @_@
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hera: Hello there... Jasmine: *knocked out* x_x Hera: Well this fic seems to be very good... now then where is Maura? Maura: *comes in* huh? Who are you? Hera: I have a gift for you... *puts a silk belt on Maura* Maura: It's beautiful... but it's kind of big... Hera: *smirks and makes it too tight* Maura: Too tight... can't breath... *faints* Hera: *makes a really tight bow* ^^ my job is done... now update soon please. Jasmine: Ow... what's going on? Hera: *pans Jasmine head again* Jasmine: x_x Hera: ^^ update soon!
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Title: More Romance
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, put me in your next chapter. My millennium item is the Millennium Charmbracelet.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL...i'll try to give it to him...but there is not gaurentee..K?k! OK and thank ya'll for ya reviews...please R&R!!! I am almost to 1000 visits...and with you i get make my goal come true!!! Please R&R!!!! ~Tamra
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: ^^ Such a good chapter... Maura: *blushes like crazy* he thinks I look hot... Jasmine: ^^;; I know and he has not even seen you yet... well in the past he did... anyways yes Maura was a princess, but here's the part that Mokuba is going to get mad... you see Maura back then had a very evil stepmother named Hera... and well lets just say that she sent someone to kill Maura because she loved Mokuba in the past... sad but true... Maura: Yeah... Jasmine: ^^;; but my story talks about the whole thing... well anyways nice chapter! And hope you update soon! Maura: Oh... *gives the author a note* Can you give this to Mokuba for me? Jasmine: Oh! Let me see... *grabs note* Dear Mokuba, I was wondering if we could meet each other if your brother does not mind... anyways I well... want to tell you something, but I need to talk to you alone... Love Maura. Maura: *blushes* Jasmine: *smirks* This should be fun... well got to go! See ya!!!
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Title: Having A Blast
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good job on the story. I relly love Yami. *Imagines Yami w/o a shirt* Damn, he is sexy. Whoa, he is HOT!!!! Can I be in your fic and fall in love with Yami?
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