| "Vegeta's Tail" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 08:56 CDT
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You are just updating like a mad woman. The chapters are wonderful by the way. I loved the last one. Going to take a cold shower now. -El-
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Title: lawijeg
Reviewed By: 654987 On: July 08, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:09 CDT
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You're right it got wierd. The squid lady is just strange. -El-
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Title: lawijeg
Reviewed By: sodh On: July 06, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 09:49 CDT
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It's another very good chapter. I actually understood the dream I think. What could the sirens be?
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kyou Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH i can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon. I have been reading the story from the beginning, Bulma's tail and i can't want to find out what happens oh wait i just put that. SORRY.
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 24, 2004 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that chapter six was so funny it made me cry. Bravo. Excellent work.
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Title: 657981
Reviewed By: mouthsofbabes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 22:12 CDT
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That was sooooo funny. Baby Trunks singing "asshole". Bravo!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, gosh-darn Vegeta's stubborness! If he just got laid with Bulma, the bond would do the rest. Of course, that would eliminate a few chapters now, wouldn't it? =) Nice suspense! More!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 10:19 CDT
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Death threats help motivate you to write faster? How about threats of torture. I'm much better at torture. Awww... Bulma's going to have him in a spaceship all to herself where she can work on him. That's kinda dangerous though don't you think? And Vegeta only killed two people. Two wishes left on the Namekian Dragonballs. They can both come back. Yeah Bulma. Anf Bulma should not be worried. I don't think that Vegeta's bond is going to let him kill her. Although letting evil Vegeta know that he is an ascended saiyan... Can the rest of the universe handle that?
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Reviewed By: kageko On: June 17, 2004 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooo!!!!!!!!!! evil cliffy!!! please finish, i must know what happens!! it's 4 in the morning, i'm so tired! lol, this is a great story.
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Reviewed By: Sweet Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can tell you watch Princess Bride and ungodly amount of times. ...An author after my own heart! Keep up the good death threats in your fic! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:47 CDT
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I sometimes think that I'm the only person who likes Gohan. He has ... potential. Good job so far. I love how you manage to keep Vegeta completely in character. I'm loving this fic as much as its predecessor. Looking forward to your next update (which I won't miss since I added you to favorite authors) -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 20:15 CDT
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My! That was fun! I must admit I hadn't read Bulma's Tail when I found this story, but that fact didn't stop me from enjoying these delightful chapters. Just what I needed on a blue day. I thought I was going to spit up my tea over Rev. Yaoi. This story promises to be quite a romp! I'll going back to read BT and look forward to your updates! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 20:47 CDT
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And to think I almost missed this story. I had Bulma's Tail built into my favorite stories and got the autonotifies when it was updated. I've been waiting for this sequel but have not been checking MM's main page not realizing that I would not be autonotified. Only by sheer luck did I catch that you had started posting this. and I'm glad I did. I loved the reverend's name. Shame on Bulma for teaching Trunks all of those curse words. The asshole song..... Midoriirochi-zu I lmao. Poor Vegeta, He has to actually eat that? Bulma just needs to have a long talk with Chi Chi about how to cook for a saiyan. Oh wait, recent death, bad idea, never mind. I still feel sorry for Vegeta. Going to New Namek huh? Just so the person who killed off all of Elder Caracol's village can get his tail back. Should be interesting. Looking Forward to your next update. -El-
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