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Reviewed By: bella_bella On: June 10, 2005 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the hell is the sequal?!?! I loved this fic! Duo is gonna bring down peace? I know the sequal is gonna be better. I you still gonna put it up? Its been a long time! Can you let us know when?
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero and the guys are fuckin bad guys, Duo cut his fuckin hair, and there is a fucking second volume coming out. Hell yeah!
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Reviewed By: Hate Dept [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 17:54 CDT
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Hey...yeah i fuckin know right...but i got so much shit i'm trying to figure out first. like a damn title...i got a lot of shit on my table right now.i started 2 new stories. Charlie asked me to write one for him, and the other just came to me. but i swear, ch 1 ov vol 2 will be out by the end of this month...it may have a crap ass title, but evetually we'll fix that. ah well back to work..
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: August 30, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Where is Volumn II? I check mediaminer every day to look for it. You'd got me all addicted to Wasteland and now I am suffering from a bad withdrawl, It is all your fault! God, I am dying to see some more of Heero "loving" Duo in his own sick and twisted way. I think deep down Duo still loves Heero, but they are doomed to hurt and abuse each other. Please update soon, very very soon!!!
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 09:57 CDT
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Good, but now I'm really depressed. Always hard to picture 01 and the others as bad guys.
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Reviewed By: Datiye A. On: August 13, 2004 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay, you need a title, I got a few suggestions. All suggestions are song titles of songs written by a band called Pantera. Don't know what kinda music ur into so I will just tell ya the titles in case youve never heard of them. THe name of the album that they are off of is Vulgar Display of Power (getting the idea?) First title suggestion, New Level. Second, Rise. Third, Mouth For War. There are other good suggestions as well. I am basing these suggestion on the lyrics to the songs compared to your story. You can read the lyrics here. http://fad-413.mtl4.targetnet.com/ad/id=dmitryivanov&opt=htj&pt=136 99000693528989455&pfin=136HNTJK35Y8C&cv=210&uid=1596545813. Just copy and paste. If you have trouble getting to that but are still interested E-Mail me at Datiye620@aol.com. If you e-mail address is differant than your pen name put your pen name in the subject. Good luck. Hope to read more soon.
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Title: Ch. 14
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks back at chapter and blinks again, grins* good thing you mention that there's a part 2 in the works or I'll have to send voracious pink-relena bunnies after you! Man I knew Duo was going to cut the braid but I wasn't sure until he started slicing it off with the razor! Oh yea!!! He beat the hell out of Heero the bastard! *snickers* Vol 2 lol... umm maybe Purple or Crimson haze...or um Sandstorm lol that doesn't sound much better but Relena woulda never thunk she'd being fighting Duo and maybe Duo'll sober up a bit so he won't make an error in tact like he did when he lost his braid. *wishes she could have seen the look on Wuffers face, it would have sho' been priceless* And oh man I can't wait to read what Duo has planned for Heero! I dunno though if I'll be able to endure all that Heero torture maybe he'll become puddy in Duo's hand real quick like so we won't have to see him suffer much *yea I'm contradicting myself but I can only stand somuch torture* Man this was good, reall good and in another universe this would be the perfect prequel to a story I'm reading by cleveryoung thief. Man that ending was perfect! *narrows eyes* hey don't get a big head or nuttin' ... oh for the second half of this story I dunno what advice to give but i wish you luck and I hope to read more from ya, 'kay!
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Reviewed By: turtle_Fire On: August 12, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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What's next? I can't wait for volumn two! Will there be more Duo torture? Keep the sweet things coming! Thanks for putting out your fics. I LOVE them all.
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Title: CH. 13
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooo. Excellent! So, Heero really is a psycho, right?
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Title: CH. 13
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooo. Excellent! So, Heero really is a psycho, right?
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been laughing all day at the spelling errors I committed criticizing your spelling. Teach me to type without coffee. Oh well. Hey, this story really takes off. The spelling/ grammAR and sentence structure is still confusing sometimes, and there were a few times when I wasn't sure what was happening, but even with all that, you Duo has me by the throat and won't let go. His dialog, and the way you make everyone else's so distinct and individual, is fantastic! You've got a great ear for that! .A lot of the expressions you use and the descriptions are just amazingly good, too. I'm totally baffled (in a good, want to read more way) by Heero. Good guy with poor social skills? Bad guy Duo secretly lusts after him too much to be smart with? Or is Duo just really, really nuts and his friends are actually good guys and we're only seeing them through his eyes? Who knows? (hope you do) Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say, the spelling and grammer problems kept me away from this story for a while, and make the reading a bit difficult, too. But your dialogue is great and characteraztion seems good, too, so far. Good description of life on the station, too. Very gritty! Very good back story on Heero and Wufei, too. I'll be interested to see how they shape up in your world.
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Title: OI! sock Heero one for me, right between the eyes!
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 04:16 CDT
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MAN! heero is one sick ass motherfudgemumma!! GRR I wanna hit all those g-boys (except trowa). Go Duo Quat deserved dagger laced words, the little butt. I can't believe Wufei smirking and commenting on Duo like he's a piece not just meat but ass. I thought that Wufei ATLEAST didn't approve of heero forcing himself on Duo. I say that shit that happen to duo was nonconsenual and he was drunk the lank bastard took advantage of him... And quat of all people says NOTHING (the lil wuss), tro + quat DO nothing. i really hope Duo's friends will be there to take him home, screw Zechs the bastard setting him uo like that!! Oi, keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Hmm... I wonder what Heero's going to do to Duo... hehehe...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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me again, man this is angsty stuff, although there are a few misspellings this is a hell of a story. And Heero is a rat bastard. how can wufei side with heero like that...MAN how could Quat of all people!!! i couldn't believe Quat, sigh. I love this story by the way and it sucks so bad that Zechs turns out the be the ass that I thought he was and how DARE he call duo 'used goods'. MAN is yuy pissing me keep trying to DO duo... and SHooT! Duo's now all intoxicated... well totally wasted and he can't defended himself like he usually can. Can't Quat sense any of the hurt or violation that yuy's bringing on Duo with his damn space heart... oh I hope trowa realizes something's up and brings Quat with him to see what an ass Yuy is. SHit! Duo loves the rat bastard and he's forcing himself on him every chance he gets...damn...DAmn good story!! lol this is the most I've cused in a review but your story is contagious in a very good way.
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