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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: June 23, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was kick ass! What a great birthday present-- to wake up and see this story has been updated hehehehe! I looved the part with Inuyasha hitting Kagome's head on stuff, and her asking if she hit her head, te he he. Keep up the fantastic work! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Hanoi (not signed in) On: June 22, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! If I haven't already told you, I absolutely love this story. Truly, and I find the plot to be both intriguing and mysterious. Definately original. I don't believe it to be confusing at all, on the contrary, I have amply anxiousness to see what you have in store next. I hope you update soon!
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: iowa chic On: June 12, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is great! It has a great plot! It has just the right amount and type of humor, I dont really care for the type with alot of stuipid humor. Keep up the good work. I really think that your a great author you update really quickly! ^_^ some other authors you have to wait for like months and its really annoying and I just quit checking to see if they've updated. I know your a fast updater and all but I'm still going to say it HHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYY UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!! ^_^
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Title: I LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: Silver Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! It's just so wonderful!I just can't wait until your next chapter comes out.Please update when you have time. I know how it is. JA Ne ^.~
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Title: I signed in for once!
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! The ending made me think of bringing tears to my eyes! (Yes, that is a compliment!) I just want to beat up Sesshoumaru for being the way he is! hehehe I cannot beleive at how well written and how flawlessly everything in your story seems to flow. Rin is just adorable and Jaken is funny too. Hell, I love all of the characters (love to hate some). Good development of everything and just a fantastic job all around! Ah- yes, the personal life often comes into interference with other things, but no worries. Good luck with the potty training. I don't have kids but my nephew is 2 and just started potty training-- So I feel your pain. Keep up the amazing work-- I'm sure that you will get 1000 reviews. Just keep in mind that sometimes people forget to review, are too lazy, or have some other stupid excuse-- it doesn't mean that they don't still love and appreciate everything you do! hehe Anywho, until next time-- Aitu
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Title: WONDERFUL!!!
Reviewed By: Naitome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't sweat it.. this chapter was absolutely fine. i think it was great like all of your others were great! please update as soon as you get a chance. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: June 02, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. simply wow. That was amazing, and I'm not even kidding! I know what ya mean about not sure if a chapter came out right or not but trust me, it did! I usually just get so grumpy by the end that I think things come out bad. I just can't even express in words how much I like this story and how well it has been progressing; I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! I think I might have an idea how the flash backs are all tied in but I'll just keep that to my self in case someone else reads the reviews and wants to be surprised. Update soon pleaaaaaaaase! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: `Hanoi On: June 01, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT! WONDERFUL! I absolutely love this fic. It is a very unique twist and individual plot. You have a very nice way of writing and the words seem to flow together perfectly. I can't tell you what a pleasure it is to read your story. I really hope you do decide to update soon. I know I will be looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 28, 2004 17:42 CDT
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Every chapter you have written thus far is excellent! Please keep going. Rin is adorable in this story. And that thing with Naraku just gave me the creeps! Good job!
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Title: Bravo!!
Reviewed By: Naitome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!!! i'm glad you write long chapters too. i like to really get into good stories and long chappies are definatly the way. i don't mean to push because you've written so much already, but please update when you get the chance.----Naitome
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Reviewed By: Nin On: May 26, 2004 19:45 CDT
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Ahhhh! Just wonderful! I love this.
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Reviewed By: Aitu (not signed in) On: May 26, 2004 11:00 CDT
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Bravo bravo! *gives you 500 dozen flowers! I loved the new chapters, hehehe. Just as good as the first one! No the story isn't moving too fast, nor is it moving too slow. It's going perfectly if you ask me! Just loved the introduction of Inuyasha, hehehe. Hell, I loved the whole damn thing, i cannot pick just one favorite part. Well I better be off now- keep up the amazing work! I can't wait until the next update. ciao! -Aitu
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I'm so sad that I just read the last completed chapter- Sad because there is no more! I can tell that I will easily become addicted to this story I love at the end how he's (Sesshoumaru) thinking to him self and then remembers Rin. Definitly made me laugh. I think you have a good writing style and an awesome plot going on here even though I don't know the whole thing, a person can just tell when it is going to be good. Hopefully you update soon so we can all read more. Until next time, ~Aitu
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Reviewed By: sesshy_baby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 18:23 CDT
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Whoa!!Already starting to like this story,hehe yeah you have Sesshomaru's personnality pretty good..*nods* he can be a Jack ass!Go Kagome!!!^-^ Anyways I really like it, please update soon,Ja ne!! -Kag
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 15, 2004 16:07 CDT
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Oh I forgot, post this on "A Single Spark" a fanfic site devoted to Kag/Sess stories. Peeps reveiw there also!
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