| "Yugi- DOA Player?!" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: November 20, 2004 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:hey red here and in answer to ur questions i would have felt like id died and gone to heaven if yugi said what he said to Kasumi i thought it was funny with the hole eavesdropping thing i thought it was sweet that yugi was encouraging his girlfriends (you know girls who are his friends) to go into different choices for their lives and i would have loved to be cuddled with yugi on a swing near nightfall it would be sooo romantic hehe and WOOT go kaiba go kaiba uda bomb uh huh hehe and one other thing ZACH U SOB GET BACK HERE IM GONNA TEACH U A LESSON U WILL NEVER FOR GET*grabs her twin scimitars and charges after Zack and slices him to ribbons then restores him with shadow magic then beats him to a bloody paulp then leaves him in the shadow realm for the monsters to eat*huh thats better well update ur beauty pageant thing great story with this one and just keep up the great work in general JA NE ^____^
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Reviewed By: Ficreader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude That was great I would hope you would write more stuff on DOA it was a great story and even thoughit was a crossover you kept preety much in line with DOA Extreme Beach volleyball game. Its pretty rare to have storys like these that are any good now a days so good work. Heres a suggestion what about a sequel say set 10 or so years in the future? anywas great stuff oh one thing though sometimes your grammer is kinda lousy by repeating yourself or saying the same word twice in a sentence so thats the only problem. Keep up the good work though. I'll be looking for storys from you.
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: Hey DJ I was looking around the site and I remembered how this fic didn't get any reviews. So I decided to be a nice little girl re-read this fic and review it all over again. Brittany: We'll be honest we weren't too crazy about the idea when we first saw this on FF.Net. Laura: Yeah we thought it was going to be pretty shallow. But then we started to read it and found out how deep it was. Me: Point is we loved it before and we're going to love it again. So expect some more reviews from me. I'm just feeling alittle nice today and this was one of my favorite stories. Like I said we'll R/R again soon. Signed, Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura
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