| "Amaterasu High" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: kittygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:20 CDT
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that was great! i love it please wright the next chappy soon i really want to see what inu will do and if sango and miroku will tell kag that kinji is inu
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Title: another test...
Reviewed By: Aiko_Is_A_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 19:14 CDT
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this is the only way for me to see my reviews!
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Title: HELL YA!!!
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!! but inuyasha and 'kenji' are the same and yet they arent cuz inu looks like inu all the time and he looks like 'kenji' only on one specific night. awwwww man this is getting good! update soon!
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Title: test
Reviewed By: Aiko_Is_A_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
testing
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Yeah! The Jewel is SHINNING! She's gonna marry Kenji(Inuyasha) This is getting really good! Update soon!
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Title: Some Advice, and Praise!
Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is going to turn out to be a very good story....I have some advice, but don't worry it's not bad...My sole purpose as a reviewer is to help authors, and give them praise... 1) I want to suggest that you try to write some of this from you view...Not just kagome and Inuyasha's, you could also do Miroku's and Sangos, Hell, maybe even Kogas. I don't mind reading it as is. i just wanted to suggest that. 2) put more emphasis on what they are thinking, like when Kagome attempted to beat up the God Tree, it would seem more realistic if she had a couple of cuts and brusises. Don't think that i'm trying to write this for you, i'm just giving some helpful critcism. Well I really do hope that you update as soon as you can! I have to be at a band Concert in about 17 minutes. Yeah! -_- ~ChickensEveryWhere~ Any comments on my critque My Email is: RachelTheStar@msn.com
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Reviewed By: Kellie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, I love the plot line. Can't wait to see Kagome get back at Inuyasha for calling her that awful name. And can't wait for the next chapter ^__^
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! maybe you could have inu use his human side to get kag!
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Title: Oh!
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOh! up-date soon! please! Update or i'll hunt you down, cut open your stomach, rip our your guts, and but them in a bowl!
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tear tear* poor Kagome. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Mandz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 15:43 CDT
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heyyy...just started reading your fic...very very nice....love the concept and everything...very traditional and i love it! lol...keep on writing...ur a great writer unlike some of the other peoples fics...KEEP GOING!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Rosaline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this story and I can't wait for updates. I wonder when the "other" charachters will appear? I really enjoy the POV from both INU and Kagome. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
It seems interesting and I like it... please keep writing ;)
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Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 23:57 CDT
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hi...can u please update soon?...pretty please?...thanx
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Pweese wupdate!!!!!!! pwity pwees!!!!! *puppy eyes*
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