| "A Wolf's Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 351 ] |
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Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou On: June 23, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon this is ganna by a tight fic
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 15:14 CDT
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yay!!!! another wonderful chapter I must say!!!but I'm still trying to figer some things out.... like why is is kagome a wolf? how is she a wolf? how did she not know? what about the jewle shards? dose she being a miko have anything to do with geting to paradise? oh ya one more thing UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! HURY! HURY! HURY! HURY! HURY! PLEASE! SUGER! SUGER! SUGER! ok where did that come frome? any way you get my point dont ya? SO DO IT!!!!!! oh sory if that was a little rude...and demanding but I'm realy impationt!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LDD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Glad you updated! It was a very good update, by the way, I like the descriptions, I could see them as I read. I can't wait to see what happens next, I wonder what Kagome is going to do when/if she meets Cheza! Good luck, and keep up the good work! ~LDD
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: June 23, 2004 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, it was funny how Kagome calmed Toboe down and how she acted kinda like a mother to him. I hope Kiba becomes her mate, they would look sould cute together, and they would be a stronge lead pair. Please get the next chapter out soon, I can't wait to see what happens next and is Kagome going to stay in her tank top and shorts or is she going to change what she's wearing? SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: June 23, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was great. I was laughing when Kagome found out that she really was a wolf. Man I would love to see what the others faces looked like when she changed. Hey who is she going to be paired up with if she's geting paired up with anyone at all? I think it should be Kiba, they would be cute together. Please get the next chapter out soon I can't wait to read more. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Adriana the dark angel On: June 22, 2004 16:55 CDT
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you must update!!!(eye twitches and hand moves towards hilt but doesn't pull it out). UPDATE OR ELSE! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hells angel (fimvr) On: June 20, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon i love ur story
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: iowa chick On: June 20, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitch* *twitch* *twitch* GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I've been waiting for a week to read more of your story but you aren't updating. >_< you had better hurry up or I will get tired of waiting and have to stop reading it. Trust me right now I am plotting many evil ways to kill you *sigh* to bad I don't know where you live. Cause if I did I would be tourturing (I know I can't spell but I'm too mad to try) you until you wrote the rest of the story. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHA ^_^
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Reviewed By: me On: June 19, 2004 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!kiba and Kagome all the way!
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Reviewed By: Jamee/ xoulblade On: June 17, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! You go girl!! Go for it............*ahem* I mean with another chapter!:D
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Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 20:23 CDT
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HOW DO YOU POST ANOTHER CHAPTER LET ALON THE FIRST??????!!!!!!!!!!!I'm having trouble with my fic.its called 'Somthin New Mexicin hey that rimed! And Yes New mexico IS a state so ha!!'Yes I am New Mexican,and i a sick of people asking if it is a state and if its alright to drink the water or when im talkin to somebody they say'ohh sory I only comunicate with united staes citisens.' HMPH one time when my mom transported some of my late uncle to our homefrom California she had to use a U-haul truck but the lady at the counter said'sory but these trucks don't leve the us' i mean how stupid of her to assume that!she probably didnt know we live in chama its on the border of colorado but still it was rude of her.I LOVE YOUR FIC =)=)=)=)=)=)=)(",)its sssooooo wonderful!!! ^________________________________________________^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^________________________________________________^
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Reviewed By: midnightryder [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I've seen both the shows and you catch the characters just right. please continue.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Ishida [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:57 CDT
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This is a very well written story. :3 I hope to see more chapters from you!
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Reviewed By: me On: June 17, 2004 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please Kiba and Kagome paring!
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Reviewed By: me On: June 17, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last chapter was cool!and funny when Kagome fainted.at the end can they find Paradise?and can she be realated to one of them? well till next time!^^
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