| "This is my life" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: contructive criticism and a plea of non-deletion!
Reviewed By: hiei_luver168 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story. it's really great, and it's addictive. your format is kinda strange (the whole script set-up), and i have to read it carefully to figure out where the sentences end and begin (punctuation) sorry if i offend you, but i really do love your story. please don't delete it if you don't reach you review quota. as a fellow author i know this site has a problem with ghost-readers. please, again i'm sorry if i offend, take the ones who do put the time in to review into consideration. you'll be taking away a really great work. i love your story. i know i've said it like a million times, but it's the truth. lol. so please update! thanks!!
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Title: PLEASE DON'T
Reviewed By: ~HIEI LOVERS~ On: February 24, 2005 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT PLEASE! :crying at background: PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
It was okay.
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool mom! My mom wouldn't let me leave the country the day after I get the news. She'd yell at me for telling her at the last minute, and then she'll yell at my Uncle for telling me the last minute.
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Reviewed By: blackdragon13 On: September 13, 2004 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
kitsune thunder dragon shuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup no one is making you resd it so you need to get a life
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Title: lALALALAL
Reviewed By: blackdragon13 On: September 13, 2004 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is the name i am going to use to rieview your storys from now on this is renee lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala(runs into someone and just gets up band starts running around the room)lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalallalal alalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalal(gets nocked out by unknown person)
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Title: jeena
Reviewed By: Yuki1000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more chapie's
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooh! i think that I am actually enjoying this. It takes alot of gore to make me enjoy something. I have no idea how you could even flinch at the whole gaping hole in cheek thing, thats childs play. Now, maybe if her jaw was dislocated and she was missing a few teeth, that might be something, moght, you'd have to make some pretty vivid images in my head. Anyway, try a gory scene, they're fun to write, and if you get messages with people saying that they couldn't take it, then you know you did a good job. lol. just kidding. Well, PLEASE update!
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya know, Sakura is SOOOOOOOOOOOO lucky, i wish Hiei would kiss me like that. all he does is 'hn' all the time. lol. well, please oh please oh please update. if you do, i won't send flames at you!
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Reviewed By: Nightwing1555 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't listen to kitsune thunder dragon because she doesn't know anything! On with the chappies! UPdate!
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Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ Nice story so far! I like it alot! You must write more, soon!! And kitsune thunder dragon, you have HORRIBLE TASTE! So HA! That's all. Update soon! See ya! -Lyona*
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Reviewed By: Neko_Ice_Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MASTERPIECE!! Pure ART!! Good job! ^__^
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Reviewed By: LD On: May 27, 2004 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
death to Leo that molester! good chap!
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Reviewed By: LD On: May 18, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
stop hating on Yuki, she's a good writer! so i don't know what you're talkin' 'bout. Nice yuki! Sorry i can't update, haven't gotten a new computer yet
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Reviewed By: kitsune thunder dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
boooooooring *yawn*
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