| "Mistakes and Misdemeanors" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Korune On: September 18, 2006 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to update this one? I really love it! And he should SOOO do Duo first! ^_~ Can't wait for more! **bounces in seat, hyper**
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Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lol! hey it is so funny I just love, so please!!!! are you going to continue?? please let me know, so see you soon!
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Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lol! hey it is so funny I just love, so please!!!! are you going to continue?? please let me know, so see you soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 19, 2005 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*still laughing* This is higly amusing! *LOL* A Heero-that thinks with his hormones, eh? *snickering* Now this visial i like! Poor Dr. J! NOW I want to know how J ended up with sex-active Heero! Since before J gave him that drug Heero was having underage sex!
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Reviewed By: Shi-tenshi On: April 05, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great story so far. I do have to say that you must be the most wicked and devious author I have ever met I mean the idea of Heero seducing Duo and Wufei until they are both lust crazy enough to get ram into the mattress so hard they won't be able to walk for a week by Heero is both awful and an idea of a complete genius (though who can complain of the idea of a really juicy lemon starring Heero, Duo, and Wufei I want to know). Well I hope you update this story soon 'kay. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 19:53 CST
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*maniac grin* Update this one! I have to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: padg On: September 10, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a fun story please continue it. I like your originality and love your style
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: August 22, 2004 11:43 CDT
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i want more i love this and it will be intresting to see how you manage to get them togethor
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Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please! I wanted to rate it 11 for enjoyment and anticipation factor, but I can't so... More of Heero-the-Duracell-Sex-bunny!
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Reviewed By: Skeren Dreamera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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::Huge grin:: Chapter two at last!! Okay, I can so see this. I can just picture Heero being completely thoughtless and doing something extreme to revel in his new ability to have sex when Wufei walks in on him, a new set of toys around him while Heero enjoys himself. ::blinks:: Now *that* was a visual I didn't expect... Oh well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: diabloangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:55 CDT
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I like what i have read. Can't wait to see what Heero has planed. I love a man on a mission, especially one that never fails.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write more soon. I am really interested. Passionate Heero? Oh, My!
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Reviewed By: priscel-not login On: May 18, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool story, please continue. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: May 18, 2004 14:50 CDT
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i like - want more please - don't know if this Heero is more scary than the old though - be fun to find out
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Reviewed By: SweetasStrychnine (not signed in) On: May 18, 2004 14:22 CDT
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lol, that's fun! Is this really a songfic? i don't think you've gotten any reviews yet so i get to be first!...um...i think heero should take duo first 'cause he seems more naturally submissive. yay for sex!
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