| "Lying From You" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:53 CDT
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i hope you update soon!!!!!!!!^_~
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Reviewed By: ryoko Imai On: July 02, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, Arigato for coming up with a great story. When I first ran into your fanfic, I was blown away by the beginning. It was unexpected but very captivating. Kagome dying, Inu having to deal with the lose, Sesshoumaru bringing her back to life, and falling in love with her. All I can say, is that I just couldn't stop reading and when I got to the last chapter, I was like, "NOOOOOOO! There must be more!" Please, please update as soon as you can. I just loved the last chapter. The ending was sweet. I personally like Sesshoumaru and Kagome being together. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: butterfly demoness On: June 12, 2004 21:19 CDT
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make another 56 chapters mwahahahahahaha
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Title: Lying From You
Reviewed By: LadyNightshade On: June 10, 2004 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
YESSSS!!!!!!! One good sess and kag fic!!! Update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu (not signed in) On: June 09, 2004 18:07 CDT
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Awwwww! How cute was that ending?! Very much cute! Good chapter! I like exclamation points! I can't wait until the next chapter! I'm sure it will be as great as the previous ones! Until later... Buh-bye!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey hey-- i really like your story *big cheesey grin* okay-- i'll stop that now! This story is fun..kinda feel bad for Inu but he's ending up with that one chick, right? lol AHHHHHHH bug on the screen!!! okay-- so its like less than 1 mm big, but still... =( Anywho- keep up the good work. Have fun in high school while ya still can, but when they say that there the best years of you life, they are forgetting to include college, muhahahahahahahahaha. Yeaaaa- so back to this review ( i am easily entertained and side-tracked) Good job, update soon! dkflkfjslfjdslkjasdlfkajslfjsl;fj (that was me being excited)
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Reviewed By: Sakanaimyuki On: May 27, 2004 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapters update again soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Mysterious Densetsuno On: May 27, 2004 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you spelled Inuyasha's attacks wrong in several chapters, its not Hiten Ketsou its Hinjinketsou its not Sankon Tesou its Sankotetsu. The stoy is overal great that's why I overall rated it 10.
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Reviewed By: Mysterious Densetsuno On: May 27, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you spelled Inuyasha's attacks wrong in several chapters, its not Hiten Ketsou its Hinjinketsou its not Sankon Tesou its Sankotetsu. The stoy is overal great that's why I overall rated it 10.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 09:51 CDT
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Continue soon, I really enjoy the story you wrote so far. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyNightshade On: May 27, 2004 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fanfic a lot, but is there going to be more of a relationship between Sesshomaru and Kana/Kagome, like mates or what?????/ Please update soon!! I want to finish it.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story please update soon!!
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Title: Great chappy
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That idea is great but you need to lengthen your chappies. Other than that it was really good!!!
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Reviewed By: ME! On: May 18, 2004 16:14 CDT
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The chapter was too short, but you got your idea across. Try to make the chapters a bit longer please.
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Reviewed By: ME! On: May 18, 2004 15:50 CDT
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The chapter was too short, but you got your idea across. Try to make the chapters a bit longer please.
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