| "Lying From You" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story please update soon!!
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Title: Great chappy
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That idea is great but you need to lengthen your chappies. Other than that it was really good!!!
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Reviewed By: ME! On: May 18, 2004 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chapter was too short, but you got your idea across. Try to make the chapters a bit longer please.
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Reviewed By: ME! On: May 18, 2004 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chapter was too short, but you got your idea across. Try to make the chapters a bit longer please.
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