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Reviewed By: me On: April 05, 2005 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I love your story! It's based on romance...but it doesnt stop with just Tasuki pleasuring Miaka!! It has a really good plot and everyhing a good story needs! Keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Akuryouxtenshi On: March 14, 2005 14:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely written, you mix the story together very well. I must say that I greatly enjoyed this fanfiction and am waiting for the next chapter in anticipation! Oh yes, the lemon was great as well.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 30, 2005 05:07 EST
Comment/Review:
sniff sniff more please? i love the love :) orion
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Reviewed By: Silver Slayer777 On: January 28, 2005 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is most enjoyable You should relllllllllllllly continue it.SO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: carelove203 On: December 02, 2004 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's me again. oh ya! you updated! thank you thank you tank you. i really love this story. please update again soon. i can't wait for the 4th chapter.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: December 02, 2004 17:59 EST
Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat(not logged in) On: December 02, 2004 09:28 EST
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! This chapter was lovely! I can't wait to get Chichiri's view on them lagging behind. LOL! Poor monk! *glomps KittyLynn* It was well worth the wait!
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Title: Good work!
Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice style of writing you have there! I have suggested this Fanfic to some of my friends, and they are thoroughly enjoying it at the moment.^^ Thank you for writing this so other people can enjoy it.^^
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Reviewed By: Midnight wolf On: September 10, 2004 17:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Just to let you know. I'd like to read Chap2 I know it's up on ff.net
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Title: Pirate
Reviewed By: The Neko On: August 21, 2004 03:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....um... wow! that has got to be one of the best lemons i have ever read... and i really enjoyed it because it wasn't just tasteless and smutty... it was very erotic and sexy... very romantic! i like how the sex doesn't come immediately and ends so suddenly... you have an excellent style of writing and portraying characters... i for one wish that tasuki would've ended up with miaka instead of tamahome... no offense to the guy, but tasuki is damn sexy! anyway, please continue soon! i'm looking forward to reading more of this story -^_^-
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Reviewed By: feywitch17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really well done. I've got a huge soft-spot for Tasuki and I like to see him happy. Keep up the good work. I eagerly await the next update!
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Reviewed By: kimberlyy On: July 04, 2004 01:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story. I never review unless I really like it. Great voice, very intersting. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: smiling On: June 07, 2004 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Seismic Toss On: June 06, 2004 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a pleasure to read your fic. I think you are a talented writer to be able to do a lemon with such class. Please update as soon as you can, k?
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Reviewed By: Ameiko On: May 28, 2004 00:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write really well. You know how to make the characters' emotions come alive for the reader, and I really like the mature pov you have given to Miaka and Tasuki. Though things are moving pretty fast between them it was still believable to me because of what Miaka has been through with waiting for Tamahome. Keep up the great work and update soon! Ameiko
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