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Reviewed By: Catalina_NekoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 07:34 PST
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heh...great follow-up on the Father Again story (which I do love) ^.^ you're one of the best fan fic writers on here it seems! Congrats on yet another great fan fic and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 10:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(As you can tell, I'm working my way through your treasure trove of stories... hahaha!) This was an excellent follow-up to "A Father Again" and I made the mistake of reading this during working hours. When Bra walked into her parent's bedroom after their indulgent "quickie" I burst out laughing and heads were popping out of cubicles all over the office. BUSTED! Thanks for the great story... on to the next one....
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Reviewed By: djFusion On: August 07, 2004 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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This story was the cutest! Very well written and a spot-on chracterization of Bra! You must have kids to pin down the toddler attitude so perfectly! ^_~ Even though I'm kinds burned out on B/V these days, I still love to find a good fic about Vegeta trying to deal with his kids! To be two years old and have the power to bend the Prince of All Saiyans like a spoon... now that's power. lol Great job! I really liked it, and I'm so glad I found it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 23:13 PDT
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What a sweet Vegeta you've written. He stays so well in character, but is a dedicated father. And I even liked Bra, even though I'm not usually a fan of baby talk.
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: June 18, 2004 06:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write Vegeta. It's absolutely amazing how you manage to give him feelings and sensitivity without compromising that trademark brashness that's such an integral part of his character. It's also really nice to read the "happily ever after" part of Bulma and Veggie's relationship as just that… happy. All the post Buu fics I've read up to this point placed them on some sensationalised rollercoaster trip from hell with Bulma having affairs or Vegeta trying to break free of the "bonds" of a normal life and I just found those tiring. You're stories on the other hand are sweet in a down to earth way and a truly terrific read ^_^ Please keep writing! I'd LOVE to see more of you're stuff.
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Reviewed By: denmark On: June 04, 2004 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so well written and SWEET and HEARTWARMING. even more so than "a father again". unfortunately parenthood is so boring for those of us who aren't parents. i hope you decide to write something actually INTERESTING soon. if you don't, i'm going to post a story about my life as a doorcloser. and it's going to be 15 pages long. and really, nobody wants to see that.
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 12:47 PDT
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Aah! This stroy is so funny and kawaii! I think Vegeta corrupted Bra..."They were going to be lamb chops anyway!" Hahaha....you managed to keep his character in a little softer way. Very nicely written!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: May 27, 2004 10:31 PDT
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Very unusual take on Vegeta. I don't think I've ever seen him portrayed this way before. Very well-written.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 02:47 PDT
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Loved it - great little vignette - carry on the good work!! :D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 18:38 PDT
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This is absolutely precious, Deb! Vegeta sounds so much like the typical father that's stuck babysitting the kids. (Bill Cosby has some great 'tales' about the situation as well.) I love how you played out his experience. He isn't really comfortable with the situation, but he'll do whatever it takes to appease 'the brat' even though deep down he loves her immensely. Getting her to watch the 'fighting mens' movie with him was a hoot! The quickie - been there, done that, got the T-shirt! You did such a cute job of describing what Vegeta wanted to do and why he didn't (like the 'no fireballs in bed' rule!) Little Bra's announcement as she walked into the room was exactly what a toddler would say, and with just as much gusto. And how sweet for the three of them to end up watching another movie (there's no way I'm going to admit to having watched it years ago.) The tender moments between Vegeta and Bulma were even more special because they had to be discrete around their daughter. And you gotta love the man that imagines kissing his mate and brat, then thinking that one day, maybe he'll do more than just imagine it. I could gush on and on, but I should probably do a bit of writing... I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Gayle On: May 23, 2004 19:48 PDT
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Sweet, funny, sexy. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Ember (not signed in) On: May 23, 2004 15:42 PDT
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I have such a wonderful warm fuzzy feeling after reading this. It was so powerful and intense in places, with images held and seen through a relaxed and content Vegeta. It's something so rarely explored, but which you managed to not only capture wonderfully, but explain and narrate in a way that was real and recognisable as being a part of Vegeta's personality. I loved the part where he kissed Bulma's hand, I actually sighed out loud when I read it. Beautiful Visuals! *hugs* Lynn
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 22, 2004 22:52 PDT
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I hope you get to do another one like this where we get to see Vegeta training his daughter in the art of fighting.
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Reviewed By: amy04 On: May 22, 2004 13:03 PDT
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this was funny and vry believable! write more! maybe a story with Trunks in it.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 22, 2004 02:03 PDT
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I liked it, you should do more one-shots like this and still have them include all the members of Vegeta's family in different settings. you should do a continuation to this.
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