| "Playing with Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: kayoko_0_chan@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: kayoko On: May 30, 2004 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
love your fics as always ^_^ oh...just wanted to let you know of fic contest: "art of sex toys" *grins* http://www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com/gw/Fic%20comp%20page.htm oh...what i want to see...maybe something to do with wax? that's always cute...abusing food items is good too...maybe...hm...kelp? *laughs* it's slimey and wet...a very weird texture..probably able to tie something with it...heh..
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Reviewed By: evilchild [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to beta-read the fic!!! I would give ideas if I weren't going to use them for myself. So if you want me to be your beta e-mail me at ylrebmik7@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy (Not signed in) On: May 26, 2004 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say put a cock ring on Heero and never take it off and put a vibrating bullet up his butt oh high speed, while having Duo do him doggie style. Heero of course would be chained to the floor, by a collar on his neck and his hands too. XD Yes I am a pervert. But hey you said we could.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey. please update soon I want to know what happenes next...I can't wait to read the very very good lemon you haven't finished.
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Reviewed By: OtosuHanyou101 On: May 24, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YUM YUM YUM and YUM!!! I luv 2x1's! Duo as seme is just soo kewl! Heero as uke to anyone is...umm...Wufei! Word! *Justice?...* Exactly! Thanks Wuffers! *My name is NOT WUFFERS!!* You can just sleep on the couch tonight! *Damn it all to hell...* >pouts< Okay, you don't have to. (sighs) *Yes!* I can't resist that pouting. Why don't I have willpower? whatever religious figure is up there either really loves me or really hates me. N e way, GR8 story hun! Keep it up! CHICKENS!!!
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