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Reviewed By: Chocolate Cheese Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 14:57 CST
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This is awesome! Continue quickly!!!
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Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 02:44 CDT
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Gaaahh! i love it!!! updated it asap okay!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: August 07, 2005 21:25 CDT
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Please update this story. I rarely see Hinata and Neji pairings. It is one of my favorite pairings for Naruto even if most people think that it's weird. I really enjoy this story. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: 4evaobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never read Neji Hinata but this was really good. You should continue, update soon please.
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Title: i'm half-death
Reviewed By: Nigai On: March 28, 2005 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oi,,, i'm almost death. i've read all the chapter, and where's next!? u made me almost crazy,,, i'm waiting for the next! u know, i'm a supporter of Neji and Hinata and i rarely fine a really good fic about 'em. know what, ur fic is one of the top of my search. so, why don't u continue it!? pls,pls,pls....
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Reviewed By: kayoko On: August 15, 2004 01:30 CDT
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wow. At first, i was a little hesitant to read this because of the odd pairing. But now that i've read it, it's actually quite good. You've managed to make this pairing quite believable. There were a few typos here and there (those can easily be fixed). I wish the chapters were longer, never seem to get enough. Oh, instead of using spacing to depict scene change, try something else to make it more obivious. Overall, it's a good fic. Thanks for writing and i look forward to more chapters from you kayoko (kayoko_0_chan@Yahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: DaNiAm On: August 04, 2004 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, twisted, fun
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Reviewed By: Maha On: August 02, 2004 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D!! This is great! Soo XXX, and your writing style is amazing! Keep writing! I'd love to see what happens next!
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Title: Going good so Far
Reviewed By: jen_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the only good Naruto Fanfic i can find because they are all about Naryto and Sasuke being gay together and i dont like that....Neji and Sasuke are my favorite characters and they should be with girls! I never would have thoutght of Neji and Hinata but it is going good....i suppose back then they didnt really care about family as long as the bloodline passes in. I like the way you made Neji jealous and so apssionate towards Hinata. Even tho Hinata is a bit out of character,i luvs it like that! I never pictured little hinata to be a hentai (i think thats how u spell it lol) Well ne ways keep going on with the fanfic PLZ! dont leave me hanging.... -Jennifer p.s i like the way u made that twist at the last chapter....i like the way she is having an arragned marriage...cant wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Zyephen On: July 20, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great! Please continue!! You left a terrible cliffhanger!!! nooo no more cliffies! Thay are the devil!
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Reviewed By: lee loves me On: July 05, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never thought about it! Neji and Hinata... who cares if their family?! Hell yes, I like this. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: mehgirl On: June 02, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love NejiHina fics! Even if they are twisted >__< please updated!
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Title: hahahahahahahahahahhhahahaahahhahahahaahahhahahaahahahhahaha
Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 02:43 CDT
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Neji and Hinata. Me likee. Keep going. Forget Phsycobratt, I like the story.
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Reviewed By: phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 02:42 CDT
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Um... did Neji just... did he just... with HINATA. Okay, um... NEJI AND HINATA?! I've gotta say... it is kinda twisted. But, doen't let me stop you. It's still a good fic. Just a little... unique. Yea, that's it.
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Reviewed By: someone is watching On: May 28, 2004 20:58 CDT
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interesting.... keep going, i like this. Neji jealous, who would have thought! eeeekk! i can't wait.
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