| ""Shards of Our Memories": The Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 22:15 CDT
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seduce kagome huh? Bet he's real happy about that one. hehehe
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Different, but I am enjoying it!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 23, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea, that chapter was hot. I can't wait for more. Every time I see the title I hear the young and the restless theme song in my head, lol. If you could some how get that to play while we read the story... *giggles* That'd be hot. Loved that water cooler talk scene, althought it would have been entertaining to have Inuyasha pummel the guys right there and then, hehe. Hell, all of the scenes were bloody great! (Where the hell did that come from.. 'bloody'. No more going to England. KIDDING ME!) Since I have completely gotten off track again I bid you farewell and will be waiting for your next chapter! YEY! Inuyasha seducing Kagome, this should be interesting! Kick ass job, love it, keep it up! --Aitu
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Title: shit man-the gd shit
Reviewed By: i forget my online name-darkkagome-or sumthin-opps lol On: July 23, 2004 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hell this stroy keeps gettin better and better i cant wait for the nxt chap....this shud be gd.i cant think of nuthin sexy to say..wht if i hit on u-wud tht work-lol ignore me im in wayy too gd a mood and ur story just made me excite dmore...i must have more damnit..lol.
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Reviewed By: x_Inuyasha_forever_x On: July 23, 2004 15:54 CDT
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This is an awesome fic. i like how you put all the characters together. please update soon, can't wait to read more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 'karu On: July 21, 2004 15:23 CDT
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awesome storyline! cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: July 20, 2004 17:27 CDT
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this is so original! I can't wait for updates!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fun! What a great idea, Inuyasha and a soap opera! It's really perfect, ya know? It leaves you so many possibilities! I bet it's fun to write? haha Well I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoy your story and I hope that you write more soon! Keep up the amazing work. --Aitu
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Title: Hey Great Fic
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It can't be easy fumbling two plots like that. Congrats on your place so far! It's awesome! Few mistakes, and you kept it interesting yet real! Good job! I'll be reviewing more if you write more! Over and out!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:57 CDT
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hey, this is good, when are you writing more?
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:35 CDT
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I'd like Inuyasha to carry me home too... but I think my fiance might beat him up once we got there. Cute chapter. Is she really going to go out with Kouga? Is any one ever going to tell Kagome she looks like Kikyou? It's going good!
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Title: Fun concept
Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story makes me grin. I like Yash's gruffness and, what appears to be glimmers of sensitivity. Kouga's eagerness is entertaining and Miroku simply cracks me up. Keep it up! I'm definately looking forward to an update! :D
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 03:36 CDT
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Very interesting story, I hope Inu will let Kagome heal his heart... keep writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fan fic so far! and Sadie, your a vary skilled writer. Normally I can find some thing wrong in a story, grammer, story line, and so on. But your story shows that you have a lot of talent. I look forward to the rest of the story!
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