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Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Beysie, Just read your story and loved it. Willow is great and so are the rest of the gang. I am not familiar with these characters but you have made me love them. Especially liked the living on the streets chapters. I really enjoyed this story, the way the characters inter-acted together and your style of writing. Can't wait to read your other stories. Trudy aka GreenEyes
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 17:21 CDT
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You must continue this, end it, and start a sequel... please???????
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito ( not signed in ) On: December 10, 2004 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like this story. Continue soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: November 28, 2004 22:48 CST
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Yay, you updated! I do hope that now the hit will be permanently dealt with... Maybe now they can live in peace, right? Please update soon! I can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 22:09 CST
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Great job on this chapter! I just live for Willow... and would love to let her loose on a few people I know! Great job in creating her! I'm glad that she's gonna help Seto with his punishment thing... I mean, kinky is one thing, but his obsession with is is damn near scary! Hopefully she can break him of it! Oh, do you plan lemons for this story? *blushes* I don't remember what your rating is for this fic... bad memory you see! That's what takes me so long to write my chapters... I get a thought going, then if I get distracted I lose my train of thought and forget where I was going... it's a pain! Speaking of losing... damn, this is your review, not a rambling post for me! This chappie was great... Joey really did get scarey there... don't ever wanna cross that boy when he's pissed! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 20:28 CDT
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This is hilarious, I love it!!! It's good to see Willow and Seto together... they deserve each other, in a good way of course! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: this is a kick ass story!! i love it so you better update it!! i mean it!! dont make me go bi-polar on you! trust me, it aint a pretty sight! Evil Yami Inga: damnit hakari youve been on the internet since 10:30 last night! GO TO BED! *tackles his hakari* give me that mouse thingie!! *wrestling match insues*
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt.....yeah yeah...i got really, lazy. On: September 22, 2004 22:01 CDT
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still loving it! so update it so i can love it more!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I love the pill addiction theory behind Seto's attitudes and actions. Update soon, I want to know more! Oh, and having Joey and Mokie together would be such a cute pairing!
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Reviewed By: Lydia On: September 04, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so loving this story! And I love the fact that you're making Seto out to be Joeys gaurdian! BWAHAHAHA! Excellent! Keep up the great work Lee! Lydia
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Reviewed By: The one and only....duh...Tamra of Egypt On: August 19, 2004 11:42 CDT
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It was really good on ur last chapter! UPDATE SOON pleezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:37 CDT
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt (not logged on) ~ sorry i was too lazy...*smiles* On: July 31, 2004 23:33 CDT
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interesting. UpDATE sOON! i need to find out what happens! ~ ta ta
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt (not logged on) On: July 25, 2004 11:32 CDT
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interesting....update soon!
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Reviewed By: aubiset On: July 12, 2004 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is intense. please finish.
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