| "Delicia the Electric" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: Hey.....
Reviewed By: Morrigan (dramaqueen) On: July 31, 2004 17:53 CDT
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Hey.... Why no updates???.... I need more, don't you get it.... and when do I get a good introduction.... And please, please!, don't make it have ANYTHING to do with what happened on the beach monday!!!
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Reviewed By: Morrigan (dramaqueen) On: July 15, 2004 22:26 CDT
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WHAT!? what happens!? fin fin fin!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24(tolazytologin) On: June 22, 2004 15:13 CDT
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Yes! Another chapter up! *Does happy dance* That's great! I like how he evaluates the gang of spirit detectives! That was great! Kepp it Up! *Looks over* Say good bye Hie--. Oh, yeah. *Giggles* He knocked himself out. *Hiei's dream: Princess power-up!* Hiei:*groans in sleep* No-nyo! Nenagh: *Evil grin* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Krishna no Lei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 22:05 CDT
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It is interesting! Good job! Keep it up big sis
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Told you, told you, told you, told you, told you, *deep breath* told you, told you, told you, told you! Nice chapter, too! ^_^
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Title: Another review
Reviewed By: Melanie Felanie On: June 17, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a teacher
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Title: My lovely review
Reviewed By: Melanie Felanie On: June 17, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neato story. Keep up the good work! (Ugh, I sound like a teacher...) I want in the story! :)
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Title: My lovely review
Reviewed By: Melanie Felanie On: June 17, 2004 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Keep up the good work! (Ugh, I sound like a teacher...) I want to be in it!! :)
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 18:02 CDT
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So...Yeah...Another chapter...another scene filled with violence. Yer getting pretty spiffy at this, dear.
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:50 CDT
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Natural witch powers to shame? That means great right! I really like your characters! Thank you for mentioning me in the end! ^^ *Pokes Hiei* Say thanks. Hn, no. *Echo in Hiei's head:-nyo* Hiei: *Starts to beat head against a rock for betraying him* Me: Tee Hee! ^.^ Please Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:13 CDT
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Greaat story! You update fast! I love how you ticked off Hiei! my favorite hobby is tortuing (sp) Hiei! ^.^ It's so much fun to do! *Hiei currently tied to a tree and is forced to watch DigiCharat* Hiei: No! Any thing but pointless cuteness-nyo! *Hears what he just said* No! It has me repeating the stupidness-nyo! Me: *Tears of laughter rolling down face* BWAHAHAHA--*Cough-hack-wheeze*ha...Anyway...Update soon! ^.^
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Title: Sporks and Fries
Reviewed By: Dramauk On: June 08, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the flow of the story and how you keep it at a conversational pace. Somethings that may add to the story would be addition of emotions to the story as a whole. Such as "Mikel," she screamed as she punched the wall next to the electrical outlet. With a sudden surge of power from deep within her the electricity all over...
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: the Dark Lady On: June 05, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. *chuckles* I think you focus on your disclaimers more than your story though. I'm impressed, please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 10:30 CDT
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*laughs* I'm in the Authoress's notes. Wondershon!
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 20:26 CDT
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*laughs joyously* Now, isn't that some stuff! Get one with the next chapter and my introduction, already! *waves a hand dismissively,taking an imperial pose* Go on...
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