| "Kyu wa murasaki des. (Today is purple)" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: tonic On: August 02, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* and the plot thickens...ignore the other picky bastards, they can't have much of a life if they enjoy correcting other people's japanese over the internet...I have a suggestion, though. I can understand the cursing, you know, character developement and all, but it's a little stilted. Just alternate "fucking" with "goddamn" or "damned" or "cocksucking", even. Most people who curse a lot tend to use more than one curse word. hake it up a it! Other than that, great chapter, hope to read the next soon.
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Reviewed By: Black Puma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it so far (although my interest in YGO has been going away since the release of the YGO movie in the USA), but one thing...it's KYOU not kio and it's DESU not des. I'm just pointing that out...sorry if I offended you.
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Reviewed By: ChronosPopcorn On: August 01, 2005 16:36 CDT
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Dude, you totally spelled the title wrong. It's supposed to be "Kyou wa murasaki no hi desu" (Today is a purple day) Just saying "Today is Purple" makes absolutely no sense in Japanese language. Sorry for being a wart, but I just wanted to correct it before AWOL anime otaku come and flame your story.
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Reviewed By: shivers001 On: July 27, 2005 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, updates! ^-^ And fanservice! Hehe, can't wait for the next chapter, of this or the defamation of recurrent entities.
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Reviewed By: XDXDXD On: July 27, 2005 17:53 CDT
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This has got to be one of the funniest storys I've ever read! I was laughing my ass off through it all. Yami's got such a bad mouth! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: WiccansLoyalRaven On: July 17, 2005 03:07 CDT
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Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:16 CDT
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hope u update soon.... and can u update right after u write it.... itz too sad to read so many at once... cuz like.... itz so many and u had to keep ppl in suspense for all that time u had this chapter done and not the others.... ^^;;;.... o well... must go now.... ja.... ~Dark~ P.S. I am not stealin dark's name from d.n.angel.... it just happen to come from my aim sn.... and i didnt kno of d.n.angel at the time.... but i currently hav d.n.angel volumes one thru seven... i want eight.... *grinz*
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 07:20 CST
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Waah! Update! *cries*
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Title: mor plz....???
Reviewed By: Inoue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wagh.... its so good.... can u hav the next chapt up soon.... im dyin to kno wat happenz next..... please??? hurry.... im dyin here.... *bleedin*... jus' a jk tho... but still i wanna kno wat happens..... la-dee-da-da-da..... still waitin here..... lol.....
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyay! Can't wait for the lemon chapters! ^^ Great Fic!
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Reviewed By: Yami'Lover On: November 26, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't to bad. I actually liked this story, however I was some what shocked at Yami's foul language every 2 seconds, but oh well I guess. And I also can't believe he yelled at the teachers like that, but if i had his attitude i probably would have too. Man he is hard-core trouble alright...but hey as long as you pair him up with Yugi-kun you got yourself a full time reviewer here. But make sure Yami treats Yugi right and he please don't let him hurt Yugi! *Sobs* I won't be able to stand it if you do! But andyway please update^_-
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Reviewed By: *appalled* On: November 24, 2004 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gods, this story is awful, and so is your Japanese. It would be, "kyou wa murasaki desu." And what's with the foul language Yami? Ugh... The lack of great fics out here shocks me.
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Reviewed By: Cynna On: November 22, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. ^__^ Just hope it won't take you so long to update this time around.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 12:35 CST
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Hilarious! I didn't realize that Yami had such a potty mouth... ROFLMAO This is just too good! It figures, he's a damn genius to boot... but then, overly smart kids often get into trouble because they're so bored. I've seen it happen with other kids quite often! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what trouble they get into next!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 10:55 CST
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Yaaaaaaaay! A new chapter! *glomps* thank you thank you thank you!!!!! I was laughing all chapter long---Yami's smarter than the teachers! And I agree with him about the literature we're forced to read in school. Anyway, thanks bunches for the update! I've been waiting for one for a long time! I'll be waiting eagerly for the next update!
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