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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Rion Lune On: April 11, 2006 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish they would have let me put a number higher than 10 because this was the best story I have ever read! (and I have read A LOT of stories) I dont think you should add anything to this story. Its perfect just as is. But I do think you should keep writing. You have a talent in finding the EXACT words to describe their feelings. As I was reading I said to myself "If I were trying to describe the Kikyo/Inuyasha/Kagome love triangle, this would be the PERFECT way." No not perfect. Perfect pales in comparison. There isnt a word to describe it.
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all let me say: Wow. I loved it. It was funny and romantic and sexy and everything! I love how you made InuYasha's human/demonic sides fight in his head. I think InuYasha is brazen enough to say those things, so, well done! And I also think that eventually, Kagome would have had enough and start saying those things too lol..Way to go..I look forward to reading more InuYasha stories like this from you in the future.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I no that this was to be a one shot, but, oh, you could definately go further with this if you really wanted to. I mean, its really good, I liked it alot. I also think it has potential as a continuation of some sort. Well, thats the impression I get from it anyways. But, thats only my thought on it. But it is very good. Keep it up, and thank you for a good story.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee!!! I think you did an excellent job of keeping him in character. Lots of good bits here: Nearly drowning, the leg thumping *snicker*, the idea that he would get distracted by the miniskirt (and Miroku isn't???). A very fun read with a nice amount of humor and a believable love scene.
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 22:05 CDT
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that was a great lemon. ^_^ it was hentai...but it still had substance. it's so hard to find that. ^_^ great job. XD
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Reviewed By: SRP - not logged in On: June 24, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like this story. I can see yopur piont with Inuyasha, his Temper can really make him act like an ass! But I think you did a really good job on him!! SRP
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
idky im only just reading this now but i loved it! great job =D
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Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the end. "I'm telling Kouga first." That made me die laughing. (Yesh, I'm a zombie now) Great story!
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: May 08, 2005 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Hot lemon! I loved the length of your fic and overall it was extremely well done. I also loved how Inuyasha's thoughts were so out of character, yet his actions were so much in character that it was easy to believe that he actually was thinking that in the anime. Keep up the wonderful job and I'm off to read more of your fics!
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Reviewed By: AmberEyez [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More More More! Nicely done...
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is a great, steamy Inu/Kag lemon. This was majorly hot. Good work!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 26, 2005 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was a great stry. It was funny very very funny. Not to much OOC. It was briliant you are one great author. Are you going to make another chapter? I would love to hear what Koga and the others would have to say to all this. Including Kagomes Grandfather(the demon hating fool). So will ya?
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Reviewed By: ApAtHy aNgEl On: March 18, 2005 22:17 CST
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Heh....hormones huh?........dude.....definetly....a...nother chapter.....heh.....can't wait......for kouga's.....reaction....iT's gonna...be iNtEnSe!...heh heh... UpDaTe p's (seeing kikyo's reaction is going to be funny as hell to! heh)
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Title: Like a dog after a bone
Reviewed By: Lady Tomboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 23:34 CST
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Gosh what an amazing story!! In my opinion, you managed to keep them both in their characters lol no worries ^_^ The way you wrote it is amazing! I feel sorta jealous of that ;) anyways lol if you think it won't spoil the whole well mood in the story, add a nother chapter, but if it does ... hehe leave it the way it is, it's perfectly fine if you ask me and honestly I like it this way (especially the ending :P) Simply amazing ^_^ -Lady Tomboy
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have one word for ya, HOT!!! I loved it! and I think inuyasha was totally IN character ^_^ and I don't know how but that line "Can I please fuck you now?" was just the toper. that's what made him inuyasha I think! and I think it was also funny,I think I thought he was going to grop her when they were on the tral. and I LOVED the fantasys he had to ^_^ I hope you keep up the good work!
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