| "Insane Wars: The Truce at Bakura" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 who apparently hasn't been logged in this whole time... On: May 04, 2005 20:07 CDT
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*gasp* No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It can't possibly be over with already!!! >< Make the other one fast so I can read it!! I can't believe you'd do that to us readers!!Oh well, you're the author...
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Reviewed By: MageDragon17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:05 CST
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Gah! Over already? No fair! *sigh* Oh well, just get the new one up fast! Last chapter was okay, not as graphic as some of your others, but still good.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: November 14, 2004 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was crazy! lol. Stupid self-insertion flamer, hahahaha, Ryou summoned Ra to eat it or him/her. lmao. whatever. ^_^ Marik could act sane for once to persuade Malik. Or not. *shrugs* So funny, just short. Write more soon. See ya.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:50 CST
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O.O Wow... I never knew Ryou had it in him... OH, well, I love him anyways! As always, Marik fails to do anything right. Typical. Jou and Seto must have gotten really lost if they managed to end up in a CYOA section; those aren't even allowed here anymore! Hehe. In summary, great chapter, keep them coming!
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Title: "Insane Wars: The Truce at Bakura"
Reviewed By: Saiya On: November 09, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Evil laughter* So many things to do, so little time! And I have to agree with Marik. Choclate covered Malik. Yummy. I usually eat my bishi's with katsup, but some you keep around to savor as long as possible. Though if Marik's going to want to enjoy his yummy little snack, he'll need to firmly attach Malik (chains will do nicely) to a sturdy surface (like the bed or dinning table). Hmm. But Marik needs to educate himself on the male humanoid body as well as other subjects so he'll know what to expect. Always be prepared! ^__^ I suggest he read the 'Gay Karma Sutra' a few choise homeoerotic stories, complementry from 'Fractured Fairy-tales', a book on the human(oid) body, and of course 'Bondage for Baka's and the Totally Insane'. Maybe he should grab one of those self-help books? ^vv^.... *ahem* I can't guess what all you have in store for our *eccentric* duo, but as long as they end up screwing like minks on the floor (or any durable surface for that matter) I'm up for whatever you write. Ja.
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Reviewed By: MageDragon17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, pretty good, but not as good as some of your previous ones. Keep it up. I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Celeste is currently talking to a wooden rooster...^^ Leave a message![BlueMonkeyCrossing offline] On: November 08, 2004 23:26 CST
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[Blinks] That...Was...So...COOL! Ryou and moodswings. You rock. *Gives you an I Hate Anzu Plushie that has a knife through the head and blood dripping* Update soon!
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Title: "Insane Wars: The Truce at Bakura"
Reviewed By: Saiya On: October 09, 2004 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lol* You've gotta love Marik! No, seriously, you have to. Or else. Speaking of which, Don't you think Malik would tolerate Marik more if he finally got laid? I mean, Ryo set them up as a couple, and Malik is not benifiting from it at all! Come on, who wouldn't be slightly vengeful if they were set up with a complete phyco with no visable good points? I think it's time for those two to just get it over with. And who knows? Maybe Malik will be less bitchy. Maybe he'll begin to forgive Ryo. Maybe Marik will become sane.... PHFT! *LOL* Yeah, right.... Really though, those two need to get laid, I mean, even Yugi's getting some, YUGI for gods sake! Ja.
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Reviewed By: MageDragon17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so short! Wah! It ended too soon. Oh well. You've updating rather quickly lately, keep it up. I await your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in) On: October 03, 2004 12:34 CDT
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That was hilarious! Ice cream compared to sex? LOL. And Marik and snuggles are going to search on the internet? That sounds like a lot of fun. LOL. Hope u ud soon. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:21 CDT
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Yey! More chappies!!!!!! ^^ It's so hilarious! Anzu just won't give up, will she? O.O Attack of the living bear! Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!! Runaway from the possessed evil Snuggles!!!!!!!! Anyways, please update soon! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:03 CDT
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I can`t wait to see what you have Marik find on the internet. That is going to be so good.
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Title: aka DMG/H on ff.net
Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in) On: September 26, 2004 22:56 CDT
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Aww, the one on ff.net got taken off, no wonder I couldn't find it. At least I get to read it here. ^_^ That was interesting and hilarious, the bear is alive? Run! lol. Ud when u can. See ya.
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Reviewed By: MageDragon17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:39 CDT
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I finally found it! Although I'm a little skeptical about how this site works. It's not nearly as well done as ff.net, but you have to put up your story somewhere huh? update please, I want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 18:18 CDT
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>< I can't believe I never got anthing for the chapter before this! Well, both of them were great! Yuugi's still obsessed with ice cream! Ryo and Bakura are still obsessed with each other! XD It would suck to live in a perfect world... Unless you have someone like 'Kura to save the day! ^ ~ Please update soon!
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