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Title: HOTT!!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to quote an immortal song: "We feelin' HOT HOT HOT!" Good Lord thats amazing! Arisu-chan, you are a genius! Keep up the good work! ErehwonDreamer3013
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Title: You might want to change the rating
Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might want to change it to NC17 before your story is removed. For being a PWP, it doesn't deserve to be pg, especially when young kids could read it. Someone could report you about the wrong rating you gave your story. Good story by the way, haven't read anything like it before.
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, that was... interesting. You gave this a PG rating?
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