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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that cell phone thing was pretty funny...good idea though, i was like ok if that things set on vibrate hes gonna call it....lol nice! ^__^ write more pwp storys your good at it! and if anyone tells you differant dont listen! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO THAT PHONE IDEA WAS GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOO THAT PHONE IDEA WAS GOOD!
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Reviewed By: viletwistedfaery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:27 CDT
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All of your fanfics are really great reads and you should keep writing them until you can't them no mo'. All my friends love your stories and that is why you are like one of our favorite fanfic wrtiers keep up the great work... *kisses*
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Title: 5 stars...or phones^^
Reviewed By: Laydee DeathStrike [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!!! I have never read anything like that ever. I let my boyfriend read it and he was shocked!! Kudos Kudos! an excellent writer indeed!
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Title: woooooooooooooowww
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 16:24 CDT
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I so wanna get laid now... i cant stop doing the thing with the cell phone...it makes me feel sooooo good...i can`t stop reading this story over... add me at tamara_liozo@hotmail.com if u wanna see me jacking of with the cell phone!!!! it will be my pleasure
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Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 16:21 CDT
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make more stries like these!!!!!!!!!i wanna cum more"!!!!!
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Title: Made me cum
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made me have an orgasm on the spot. i even tried with the cell phone thing. It hurt a bit when vibrating, but it did give me about 5 orgasm.Told my friends and they did it too...great fashion...lol
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: sunshine_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was great..very erotic and write more like those... almost gave me an orgasm!!!!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 02:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok this was pretty cool! I acctually rather enjoyed it! Miroku/Kagome pairings are always good!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Ultimate Dragoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be the best "one shot" story I have ever read...Keep up the great work and I hope to see more like this.
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Reviewed By: Frozen Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 19:12 CDT
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That was hot. Loved it.
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Title: HOTT!!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to quote an immortal song: "We feelin' HOT HOT HOT!" Good Lord thats amazing! Arisu-chan, you are a genius! Keep up the good work! ErehwonDreamer3013
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Title: You might want to change the rating
Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might want to change it to NC17 before your story is removed. For being a PWP, it doesn't deserve to be pg, especially when young kids could read it. Someone could report you about the wrong rating you gave your story. Good story by the way, haven't read anything like it before.
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, that was... interesting. You gave this a PG rating?
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