| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya!! a new chapter!!!! can't wait for the next one!!!!! you have really brought this story to life for me. I have really enjoyed reading this story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 09, 2005 16:37 CST
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I hope after this therapy session, the doctor will speak privately to Trunks and tell him to not demand more of his father than he is able to give, and make him read his notes from previous sessions to give Trunks an idea of what his father had to endure until he became a father.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: sun_raye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! Everything so well written and it really sounds like you know what you're talking about. I Especially like Vegeta's sessions they seem so real (not that I would know or anything :) So great job and keep up the good work!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how much more does this family have to go though before they are alright...god this was a very sad chapter really.it pains me to read about the thinks that happened to him..and i know that this does happen in really life but DAMN...i just want them to be happy..please update soon...maria
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with bulma with whats happening and how she said it to her son..but i can also understand why trunks feels the why he does..i just feel sorry for all of the really i do..and poor bra she has no clue as to what's going on in her fanily lives. thank you giving us this gift of a chapter before christmas...and i hope you have a wonderful holiday with you family unlike vegeta's family...maria
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Title: "Finding Peace"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story loved it.i feel sorry for all of them right now...almost sounds like my family lo=ife...lol...update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: December 10, 2004 22:57 CST
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damn trunks making vegeta go back to the GR. glad you skipped through bulma's surgery quickly and bulmas fine! too bad you didn't post what bulma was talking to bra and explaining to her what she witnessed. update soon!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 10, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad the he was there for her.but he also needs to there for his kids as well.i just love the way you go inside of them and bring them to life..wonderful chapter again and i can't wait to read more..please update soon...so is vegeta going to last four days and NO SEX...lol
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY! YOU REALLY BRING IT TO LIFE! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW YOU END IT! PLEASE A HAPPY ENDING! FROM A NEW FAN!! ^-^
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: Venus L On: November 29, 2004 05:53 CST
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oh my gosh how can Epeon just turn the tables like that. I was just cheering for Bulma to punch her . Oh and the website I got the link from was http://www.geocities.com/tempestrose12/ and the review was in the Forum under Recommended Fics List by Purple Rose.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 28, 2004 21:48 CST
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*gasp* what bra saw is very disturbing, seeing mommy and daddy like that. thank god she didnt' know what was really going on. enjoyed that vegeta went to talk to the doctor without bulma knowing. hope you skip through bulma's surgery but not the ordeal afterwards. update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 28, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness that was ssooooo great.i need a VERY COLD shower..you know my son use to do the same damn thing.so i know he they felt...oh this story gets better and better everytime i read it...please update soon...maria
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Title: up to chapter 27 of Finding Peace
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:54 CST
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Oh my Gosh Vegeta nearly cheated on Bulma I can't wait to find out what Bulma does to Epeon, for 'hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.' I am finding it a little hard to take in that Vegeta made out with a woman apart from Bulma eight years ago as up untill recently Vegeta has always been aware of his surroundings as soon as Epeon stepped in the room he would have known it wasn't Bulma because of the Ki and if that failed he would of noticed the different sent. I'm not sure whether it's more the fact that he was lonely and depressed and mistook her for Bulma in his dream or that he knew for a fact that it wasn't Bulma but wished deep down that it was,which could explain why he didn't open his eyes so as not to prove his fantasy wrong. But then again he did say he wasn't attracted to Epeon which still leads me feeling confused as to why he would do it. I'm on to the next chapter can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 11:16 CST
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This story is great it seems that it will be a while before the Breifs Find Peace in their lives let alone the saiyan especially now that Bulma might have Breast cancer.
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Reviewed By: hurrah On: November 24, 2004 10:51 CST
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This story is really cool but it would be even better if the chapters were longer and you wouldn't make these giant gaps between lines. Thank you! :)
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